Trust
Trust in God awakens our soul.51 total reviews
Comment from crzypnter
Hi RPSaxena,
This is a wonderful poem that gives credence to the Lord. Beautiful message with in write. Which speaks volumes to your faith as well. Thanks for sharing God bless
August
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hi RPSaxena,
This is a wonderful poem that gives credence to the Lord. Beautiful message with in write. Which speaks volumes to your faith as well. Thanks for sharing God bless
August
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Crzypnter
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words and lovely thoughts backed by Blessings.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from l.raven
HI RP, I wish people would all look and turn to God for help...have faith and know He will be here for us my sweet friend....and He will...all the hate and evil going on now is just wrong...and the devil is in his glory....sigh...believe in God...Jesus....and know you life will change...I believe that....I fell and got a virus... still not feeling to good...but I know it will just take time...I love every word in your poem....and your picture is beautiful...very nicely written....love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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HI RP, I wish people would all look and turn to God for help...have faith and know He will be here for us my sweet friend....and He will...all the hate and evil going on now is just wrong...and the devil is in his glory....sigh...believe in God...Jesus....and know you life will change...I believe that....I fell and got a virus... still not feeling to good...but I know it will just take time...I love every word in your poem....and your picture is beautiful...very nicely written....love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hi L. Raven,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, and lovely thoughts backed by SIX STARS! , in spite of your illness.
Dear Friend, Mentally you are perfectly fit, sick and weak only physically. Wish you speedy recovery!
With best wishes,
~RP
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Hi RP, doing a bit better...still a ways to go...but I am healing...thank you so much for caring...off to see the doctor tomorrow...love to ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a great faith poem with an encouraging message. Your poem is well rhymed and expressed, and I particularly like the second stanza about how trusting in God enables us to achieve our goals. I found no errors in your poem but plenty of faith-based advice.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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This is a great faith poem with an encouraging message. Your poem is well rhymed and expressed, and I particularly like the second stanza about how trusting in God enables us to achieve our goals. I found no errors in your poem but plenty of faith-based advice.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Sis Cat,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, and lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
What a wonderful tribute to the Lord! This is magical and spiritual, I loved this, I think it is phenomenal, a real testament to your faith love and god bless you Meia :)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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What a wonderful tribute to the Lord! This is magical and spiritual, I loved this, I think it is phenomenal, a real testament to your faith love and god bless you Meia :)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Meia,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, and lovely thoughts backed by Blessings.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very nice poem flows well and delivers an encouraging message. Excellent choice of artwork. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Good job!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Very nice poem flows well and delivers an encouraging message. Excellent choice of artwork. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Good job!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Kathleenspalding,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words and lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
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You're welcome
Comment from RGstar
The essence is in believing what you write for though shall the soul materialize.
I really like the first stanza.
Good luck in the competition. Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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The essence is in believing what you write for though shall the soul materialize.
I really like the first stanza.
Good luck in the competition. Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello RGstar,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words and lovely thoughts backed by Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from ronnie k
AMEN, this is wonderful poetry but more than poetry this is exceptional praise and testament to the Father mercy, grace and perfect love for us and just think all He wants from is a YES FATHER, yes I will obey.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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AMEN, this is wonderful poetry but more than poetry this is exceptional praise and testament to the Father mercy, grace and perfect love for us and just think all He wants from is a YES FATHER, yes I will obey.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Ronnie k,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words and lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely poem of faith. Well written in aabb rhyme.
Trust in God awakens our soul is a beautiful message to live by.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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A lovely poem of faith. Well written in aabb rhyme.
Trust in God awakens our soul is a beautiful message to live by.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Hello Jmf4119,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and encouraging words backed by Blessings.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Thal1959
This is very nicely done, in a standard a,a,b,b scheme and in tetrameter; though not iambic. It nicely expresses the intended sentiment, although I found the line, "But His sense in life works a lot;" to be a bit confusing as I don't know what His "sense" refers to. But that's just me.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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This is very nicely done, in a standard a,a,b,b scheme and in tetrameter; though not iambic. It nicely expresses the intended sentiment, although I found the line, "But His sense in life works a lot;" to be a bit confusing as I don't know what His "sense" refers to. But that's just me.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Hello Thal1959,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and sharing your lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
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You're welcome. It was my pleasure, RP.
Comment from nuthead
A lovely inspirational, uplifting poem. Enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm, and the message. The rhyme pair untrod with God is a fitting choice. Well done. Good luck in the Faith poetry contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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A lovely inspirational, uplifting poem. Enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm, and the message. The rhyme pair untrod with God is a fitting choice. Well done. Good luck in the Faith poetry contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Hello Sjharshenin,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, encouraging words, and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
