Trust
Trust in God awakens our soul.51 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm always happy to find one of your poems in my message box. You have a special way of making your work put a person to thinking and feel like they could have written some of the words themselves. Although, my message or excellence would be far from comparable. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I'm always happy to find one of your poems in my message box. You have a special way of making your work put a person to thinking and feel like they could have written some of the words themselves. Although, my message or excellence would be far from comparable. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Ric Myworld,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, and lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Ben Colder
Trust in God awakens our soul. Powerful phrase for this poem. Good contest piece. I hope you success at the winning circle. My blessings to you.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Trust in God awakens our soul. Powerful phrase for this poem. Good contest piece. I hope you success at the winning circle. My blessings to you.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Ben Colder,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, lovely thoughts, and Best Wishes backed by Blessings.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I like your faith poem with an encouraging message. It is well rhymed, and I like the second stanza the best. It has a nice message.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I like your faith poem with an encouraging message. It is well rhymed, and I like the second stanza the best. It has a nice message.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello ,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, and lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Oatmeal
RPSaxena,
Well chosen words, colorful arrangement and wonderfully decorated thoughts. Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, thought provoking, very enjoyable and thrilling.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
You wrote this one very well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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RPSaxena,
Well chosen words, colorful arrangement and wonderfully decorated thoughts. Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, thought provoking, very enjoyable and thrilling.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
You wrote this one very well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Oatmeal,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, and lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Thamp
Trust and faith, always something we can benefit from by reading. More so, of course, by living. I honestly believe that anyone who tries will perceive Him. "Whether we perceive Him or no". Thanks for writing and sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Trust and faith, always something we can benefit from by reading. More so, of course, by living. I honestly believe that anyone who tries will perceive Him. "Whether we perceive Him or no". Thanks for writing and sharing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Thamp,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, and lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from sunnilicious
Trust In God... it's the best way to go. I enjoyed reading your poem. It was spiritually motivating. Well thought out and perfectly written. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice work. Good luck in the contest. Have a great weekend :)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Trust In God... it's the best way to go. I enjoyed reading your poem. It was spiritually motivating. Well thought out and perfectly written. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice work. Good luck in the contest. Have a great weekend :)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Sunnilicious,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, lovely thoughts, and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Wabigoon
RPSAXENA--
It awakens the faith in...so many! How are you going to keep the Ku Klux Klan's faith from being awakened? How about the good Reverend Roberts who believes the Hurricane Katrina disaster in New Orleans was God's revenge? How about Rev. Haggee's "faith" that Hitler's a part of God's plan and necessary to it? You..gotta do better than cheer leading for "faith," sorry. That's just not enough for me. Somewhere in the poem has to be an iota of truth, that you know the truth, that it's a human truth and that it is unvanquishable. I do not see that in your fine poem.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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RPSAXENA--
It awakens the faith in...so many! How are you going to keep the Ku Klux Klan's faith from being awakened? How about the good Reverend Roberts who believes the Hurricane Katrina disaster in New Orleans was God's revenge? How about Rev. Haggee's "faith" that Hitler's a part of God's plan and necessary to it? You..gotta do better than cheer leading for "faith," sorry. That's just not enough for me. Somewhere in the poem has to be an iota of truth, that you know the truth, that it's a human truth and that it is unvanquishable. I do not see that in your fine poem.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Wabigoon,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and sharing your so nice thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from rjuselius
this is a brilliant entry for this particular contest dear rp saxena! i think your poem is very clever and insightful! i especially enjoyed the last stanza.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
virtual six!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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this is a brilliant entry for this particular contest dear rp saxena! i think your poem is very clever and insightful! i especially enjoyed the last stanza.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
virtual six!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Rjuselius,
Thank you very much for your so lovely words backed by good luck! virtual six! and blessings!
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Feeling of divine grace, awakening in soul, enhancing self-confidence and leading to sure excellence are the fruition of faith in God, the poet writes fluently in rhymes, I liked this spiritual inspirational poem.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Feeling of divine grace, awakening in soul, enhancing self-confidence and leading to sure excellence are the fruition of faith in God, the poet writes fluently in rhymes, I liked this spiritual inspirational poem.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Thank you very much for your so encouraging words, and lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
Comment from lyenochka
This is an excellent exhortation to faith. However for me, I think self-confidence and having faith in self often counteracts having faith in God. It's often when I'm at the end of myself, that my faith can grow and trust in God.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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This is an excellent exhortation to faith. However for me, I think self-confidence and having faith in self often counteracts having faith in God. It's often when I'm at the end of myself, that my faith can grow and trust in God.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello Iyenochka,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and sharing your so lovely thoughts.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP
