Sing
a clarity pyramid4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Music is very soothing and it would be great if is can start bringing a stop to war and hatred. Something has to. I like the artwork and the words.
Keep writing and good luck.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Music is very soothing and it would be great if is can start bringing a stop to war and hatred. Something has to. I like the artwork and the words.
Keep writing and good luck.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the review. There was a photo of an old man in his bombed out building in Aleppo, sitting on his bed listening to his record player. It brought me to tears. Cheers, j
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You're welcome. Good art can do that.
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You're welcome. Good art can do that.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is awesome. All the syllables are accounted for correctly. Your pyramid shape is beautiful. Your topic is super, too. Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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This is awesome. All the syllables are accounted for correctly. Your pyramid shape is beautiful. Your topic is super, too. Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the review, Jan.Nice to have some challenging new prompts to enter, cheers, j
Comment from Bridge
A beautiful poem with a beautiful message. It is well written especially keeping in mind the constraints . The artwork adds to the appeal of the poem. A great poem indeed.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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A beautiful poem with a beautiful message. It is well written especially keeping in mind the constraints . The artwork adds to the appeal of the poem. A great poem indeed.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the review and unique prompt.. I just wish there was a little more peace in this world, cheers, j
Comment from Heidi M
Very impressive Clarity Pyramid. Your poem meets the criteria. This would have been a challenge but you did well creating it. I love the thought of voices blending as one to rise above the turmoil. It's true that music is the universal language.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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Very impressive Clarity Pyramid. Your poem meets the criteria. This would have been a challenge but you did well creating it. I love the thought of voices blending as one to rise above the turmoil. It's true that music is the universal language.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging review. Imagine if the people in power came from a place of genuine love and peace instead of money? Just watching trump dismantling needful and generous help to the people (meals on wheels which is so much more than food to the elderly, c'mon) makes me weep, while he scoffs down 50 dollar breakfasts with his rich cronies What can you expect from a rich man's son that is fueled by profit, winning and false adoration? Cheers, j
