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first time love
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Comment from
Sherman541
Ouch I felt that pain - have never had to have anything like that done to me or my kids or hubby but Ouch - still want to know the answer to so many questions - coming in the next chapters :) Great Job
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
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reply by Sherman541 on 20-Mar-2017
Comment from
mmonaghan777
This is a great addition to your Ayana story and easy to follow. The graphic description makes me want to cry. I will look forward to more chapters.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
Comment from
prettybluebirds
Excellent. This is a cute and well written story. You have a processor error in the word fiance. Sometimes when you post they do that. Good work
Comment Written 11-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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