Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Descriptive and interesting with the two sides of an electrical storm. For me, the coziness of snuggling under the duvet is most appealing. I'll save the dancing in the rain for a warm summer rain. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017

Thanks for the review. I love those thunder storms and the smell of the wind.I remember a few years ago in Vermont there was a rare hurricane warning for the afternoon, and in the morning the air was so different almost like a vacumn as the storm was building up, Cheers, j

reply by BeasPeas on 13-Mar-2017

Hi Judy. I see you won the contest. Congratulations to you. Marilyn

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017

Thanks for that,it was a fun write, cheers, j

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This sedoka, Storms, approaches the scene with both a guarded attitude of danger, and one that is more positive and awestruck with the power of nature. Nice.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017

Thanks for the review. Some people hate storms, some love them. I love them, cheers, j

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

This is a nice sedoka. It flows well, and draws great pictures. The words flow well and the syllable count works for the poetic form. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017

Thanks for the review. Some people hate storms and some love them. I love them, cheers, j