Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

I like the look of this haiku
I get a clear, concrete image in my mind from the first two lines. They are connected beautifully.
Your satori is great! Dew looks so beautiful in the sunlight.
Just a suggestion, add a Kireji after the word "dew"

on morning dew--

It shows the break between your first two lines and satori

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017

Thanks Lu, I shall add a kireji.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

I love the morning dew! Your words flow well and give a good description of the sun reflecting. Thank you for sharing this haiku.
~patty~

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017

Thank you Patty:)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

It's no secret, Kerry.
I'm a big fan of alliteration, but only if it reads naturally and unforced.
So, naturally, I really enjoyed both the alliteration as well as the brevity in this wonderfully well written haiku.
Your two/four/four syllabic count is more in line with Japanese on, or sounds and Japanese haiku, than their wordier English cousins.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017

Thank you so much Dean, I appreciate that. I'm learning from my delightful mentor everyday. YOU!xo

reply by Dean Kuch on 08-Mar-2017

We try to tell people that so much can be learned in the Haiku Club chatroom, Kerry, but no one seems to believe us unless they try it out for themselves.
The members are all a bunch of great, very talented writers.
All are more than willing to help if needed.
It was fun having you there...at least until I got booted off the sever, LOL.
Keep up the great writing.

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017

Your very sweet. It was fun being there. That's funny you try to tell people but they don't believe. I suppose you can lead a camel to his oasis; But can't make him enjoy it. Ha I don't know why i said that; I was going to say lead a horse to water , but can't make him drink. I found it cliche' I tried to be original. LOL

reply by Dean Kuch on 09-Mar-2017