Beware the Seagull
one seagull's warning15 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Connie, I enjoyed reading this lighthearted and well rhymed poem. It was amusing and yes, I can also imagine this feisty seagull giving you a stern look to keep its privacy. Well done on this fun read. ~DD
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
Connie, I enjoyed reading this lighthearted and well rhymed poem. It was amusing and yes, I can also imagine this feisty seagull giving you a stern look to keep its privacy. Well done on this fun read. ~DD
Comment Written 08-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your review.
Connie
Comment from mbroyles2
The seagull was definitely giving a few warnings.
I like the terrific rhymes and excellent pace of this poem.
You did a great job with the imagery and the words were crisp.
Wonderful writing!
Michael
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
The seagull was definitely giving a few warnings.
I like the terrific rhymes and excellent pace of this poem.
You did a great job with the imagery and the words were crisp.
Wonderful writing!
Michael
Comment Written 08-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Thank you for such an encouraging review.
Connie
Comment from MaggieF
Seagulls have had bad press recently. Your poem rings true, good rhyming scheme. And I like the traditional four line stanza. Enjoyed. MaggieF
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
Seagulls have had bad press recently. Your poem rings true, good rhyming scheme. And I like the traditional four line stanza. Enjoyed. MaggieF
Comment Written 08-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Thanks so much, Maggie, for your review.
Connie
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
That was an adorably cute poem. good humor in it.
It rhymed so well, and flowed beautifully. Well. the seagull
had a pretty photo taken, and inspired a cute write.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
That was an adorably cute poem. good humor in it.
It rhymed so well, and flowed beautifully. Well. the seagull
had a pretty photo taken, and inspired a cute write.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your most encouraging review.
Connie
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Your welcome Connie.
Comment from moonsunrise
I love seagulls and the ocean. This is a very cute poem with great imagery. The onlooker is being forewarned. He should heed the warning or there will not be raindrops falling on on his windshield.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
I love seagulls and the ocean. This is a very cute poem with great imagery. The onlooker is being forewarned. He should heed the warning or there will not be raindrops falling on on his windshield.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Thanks so much for your review.
Connie