Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Well...
...if this haiku doesn't cause a zenful feeling inside of those who read it, I don't know what would, Kerry.
There's nothing that makes your problems seem smaller and more insignificant than sitting and staring out over the vastness of the sea.
Well done!
Welcome to the club.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you Dean for the wonderful review. It is quit zenful. I even tried to pick a picture that looks most like me. :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 06-Mar-2017

Good job. :)

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you xo

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a nicely worded haiku. The words do paint a picture for readers. And your art choice is perfect.

One concern: you have 18 syllables

sit ting on white sand 5

sun glist en ing on my skin 7
[I may have glistening divided wrong but I believe it is 3]

waves crash up on the shore 6

I am not lowering the rating in case I have figured wrong. But I would check. Jan

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you for your wonderful review, and noticing my typo. I write on paper, upon was in my 1st rough copy. I didn't realize I did that, I changed it to on. Thanks again. :)