Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Now THAT is a beautiful haiku! I really love the presentation and the dynamic image of the hammock and the soothing tranquil sounds of the surrounds.
You have captured in 3 lines what others would take a whole poem to do As you already know haiku isn't my favourite form of poetry, but, THIS one stands out because it took me to a soothing place and if poetry can do that then one has achieved their goal.

dip

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

That's the whole point of haiku, Mark. To transport those who care enough to read what you've written to a peaceful place and moment in nature that you have observed, and to be brief about it.
It's a very spiritual form of poetry, if done properly.
All my best, mate, and thanks again.
~Dean

reply by DR DIP on 05-Mar-2017

well you've certainly done that today

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

:-)))

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Very nicely done. The anticipation is a great aaaahhh line. And the picture with the piece makes it just right for dreaming of a loved one. Nice and sweet.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Thanks for reading, Barb.
Take care,
~Dean

Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

This type of waiting can be very pleasant, and in fact, we may even worry if we expect too much from the anticipated event.

Also, I should resume Haiku writing and try to contribute to the club.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

We'd sure be awfully glad to have you in the club, Mark.
It costs nothing; all you need to do is contact Gypsy Blue Rose here at FanStory by private message to tell her that you're interested.
She'll give you all the info you need to get signed up.
Thank you for reading and commenting on my haiku for this weeks challenge pertaining to summer.
I appreciate it.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Dean, this is a lovely haiku - all rules followed - lines one and two interconnecting well and line three is a lovely satori. Your picture is absolutely heavenly. I love it. So moving and I don't mean the hammock LOL. Warm regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Thanks, Dorothy.
I appreciate your comments.
~Dean

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Exceptional

Hello, Darlin',

I love your beautiful summer haiku... very romantic.

The well-chosen words, kigo, and insightful satori make this an excellent chapter in our book. Thank you for posting it, sweetheart.

The presentation is stunning. It almost looks real. I want to step right in.

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Ah, Dean, this is a fine and sweet summertime haiku filled with romance and longing as the miles melt between separated lovers. Your words are well chosen to convey this sentiment of anticipation. Thank you for sharing your considerable talent. See you in tanka class tomorrow.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Hello, Andre.
Thanks for reading my haiku for the week 13 haiku Club challenge.
I appreciate your comments, and I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
Take care, warmest wishes...
~Dean

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Wow! This is a beautifull refreshing write from your camp Dean, you must be in love, anticipation is so sweet, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Hello, Dolly.
There was a song by that name at one time, wasn't there? LOL...
Thanks for reading my haiku for the week 13 haiku Club challenge.
I appreciate your comments, and I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
Take care, warmest wishes...
~Dean

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Your haiku Dean,
to me has a message

anticipate
the warmth of summer
as miles of frigid cold
melts till summer fills our dreams

Gert

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Hello, Gert.
Thanks for reading my haiku for the week 13 haiku Club challenge.
I appreciate your comments, and I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
Take care, warmest wishes...
~Dean

reply by Gert sherwood on 05-Mar-2017

Take care Dean

Gert

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

U 2

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Sweet and tender. A different flavor from your pen! The lovely phonetics enhance the gentleness with the alliteration of S and M and the consonance of L, T, S and soft C. Lovely presentation. Love the single word satori! Bravo

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Thank you very much for reading my haiku for this weeks Haiku Club challenge on Summer, rd.
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, and I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

reply by rama devi on 05-Mar-2017

:-))))

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is a most attractive haiku style piece. I say "haiku style" because is it not more of a senryu, involved with people rather than nature? Everything else seems spot on, syllables kigo and a fine satori, but the nature thing seems absent to me. I still like it though so I shall give it fife as Basho I believe said one could write about anything, and I don't want to argue with someone called Basho on any subject.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

We are all a part of nature and her grand design, Jim.
But this actually does have a kigo--"summertime."
It's also perfectly acceptable to use human references in haiku poetry.
That one word, "summetime," differentiates this from senryu poetry.
Senryu is often witty, or funny as well.
This, hopefully, is not.
Thanks very much again for reading my haiku.
I wish you well, my friend.

reply by Pantygynt on 05-Mar-2017

Thank goodnes I didn't give a failing grade then. Lol.

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Aw, I'm pretty used to failing by now, 'Gynt.
In fact, I've become quite good at it, heh-heh.

reply by Pantygynt on 05-Mar-2017

;~))