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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "haiku (sweet summertime dreams)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
46 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
:) I think it sprung here last week, only to stick it's head in the ground as freezing temperatures took over. I love snow; I love winter--but ready for new life to spring (that wasn't meant, lol)
Love the bird sound effects!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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:) I think it sprung here last week, only to stick it's head in the ground as freezing temperatures took over. I love snow; I love winter--but ready for new life to spring (that wasn't meant, lol)
Love the bird sound effects!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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Thank you, Rasmine.
I appreciate your review, and I'm glad you liked the haiku.
Take care,
~Dean
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Dean - the music started automattically and I couldn't for the life of me get it to stop. It, for me, was distracting.
Loved your poem, it had that slow awakening of the senses I like.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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Dear Dean - the music started automattically and I couldn't for the life of me get it to stop. It, for me, was distracting.
Loved your poem, it had that slow awakening of the senses I like.
Thanks for sharing.
m
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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Music? You hear music in this post, Maureen?
All I hear is birds.
Thanks for your review.
~Dean
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Oh, by the way...
I believe every computer comes with a volume control where you can mute your speakers.
Mine does.
You'll usually find it in the lower right-hand corner of the desk top tool bar.
Just for future reference...
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to me birds sing, thus music...LOL
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Yes, got it. But for those of us not on wifi, video eats up to much data.:)
Comment from BOO ghost
I think Freddie Kruger said them words, sweet dreams... did you use Windows paint on this? You just paste it, I suppose. Boy, that hammock ;looks like a good place to catch some z's in the bush. The birds are chirping... the bees are going bezerk. You use beautiful words. I could take a nap now. Nice one! BOO!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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I think Freddie Kruger said them words, sweet dreams... did you use Windows paint on this? You just paste it, I suppose. Boy, that hammock ;looks like a good place to catch some z's in the bush. The birds are chirping... the bees are going bezerk. You use beautiful words. I could take a nap now. Nice one! BOO!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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Yep, I used paint just for the special font, BOO.
I just typed the words in a font called Distant Stroke, on a white background them uploaded them to Photobucket as a picture. I used the HTML code they generate, copied it, and pasted it here.
After that, I added the animated gif of the hammock at the top.
I'm glad you liked this.
I really appreciate you taking the time to read it.
~Spooky
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yep, well, I new that fanstory don't have cool fonts like that. Fanstory could add a few more fonts i think... yep, the font you picked looks great. yeah, think i could do it, may take a few tries to get the knack of it. I am lazy ghost. I promoted my haiku higher in case gypsy wants to peep, I pay a handsome sum for all of the long free verse. Added a couple more images too. Well, see you in Wonderland. BOO
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See ya there, BOO...
Comment from Lu Saluna
I like this one, it is a very lovely human nature haiku.
It most definitely speaks of summer and "melts miles until I'm with you" is such a beautiful line. The satori speaks for itself. Well done.
Hugs Lura
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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I like this one, it is a very lovely human nature haiku.
It most definitely speaks of summer and "melts miles until I'm with you" is such a beautiful line. The satori speaks for itself. Well done.
Hugs Lura
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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Thanks for reading, Lura.
I was just discussing your latest chapter of The Chase with Gypsy on TeamSpeak.
I am grateful you took the time to trad and comment on sweet summertime dreams.
Take care,
~Dean
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I always enjoy reading your work. :-))
Oh, say 'Hi' for me. I look forward to your comments on my latest chapter.
Take care, Lura
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You bet, Lura, will do!
~Dean ;)
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very nice haiku conjures up that summer vacation feeling of missing your special school friends. Flows well. Excellent choice of artwork. Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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Very nice haiku conjures up that summer vacation feeling of missing your special school friends. Flows well. Excellent choice of artwork. Great job!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading my haiku for the Haiku Club's week 13 challenge on "Summer", Kathleen.
I appreciate your time.
~Dean
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You're welcome.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
That was a very beautiful haiku Dean. It was perfect. I read your notes on the differences, I will pm you I have questions on this topic.
I love the birds chirping and the hammock, ahhhh, I wish I was laying in it reading a book.
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That was a very beautiful haiku Dean. It was perfect. I read your notes on the differences, I will pm you I have questions on this topic.
I love the birds chirping and the hammock, ahhhh, I wish I was laying in it reading a book.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
Comment from Aussie
Spring has sprung, the grass has ris, wonder where da flowers is?" Sweet subject for you who must be obeyed (in the hellish poems we read.) Still, I enjoyed the gentle sway of the hammock and the Haiku that painted a picture of tranquillity, waiting for the love of your life to come home. Dreaming away as hammock does sway. Well done Dean.
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Spring has sprung, the grass has ris, wonder where da flowers is?" Sweet subject for you who must be obeyed (in the hellish poems we read.) Still, I enjoyed the gentle sway of the hammock and the Haiku that painted a picture of tranquillity, waiting for the love of your life to come home. Dreaming away as hammock does sway. Well done Dean.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
Comment from country ranch writer
Beautiful set up for this very nice haiku waiting for others to show to join in the fun in the sun. It is such a beautiful day to be outside being kicked back and free to lie in the sun
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Beautiful set up for this very nice haiku waiting for others to show to join in the fun in the sun. It is such a beautiful day to be outside being kicked back and free to lie in the sun
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Summertime Dreams, uses alliterative phrasing, along with a hint of 'sweet', 'melt'ing, and 'anticipation', to join the splendid production of sight and sound, and create that cool sensation of springtime. Nice.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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This haiku, Summertime Dreams, uses alliterative phrasing, along with a hint of 'sweet', 'melt'ing, and 'anticipation', to join the splendid production of sight and sound, and create that cool sensation of springtime. Nice.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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Thanks for reading my haiku, Bill.
I'm really glad you liked it.
Take care,
~Dean
Comment from Sasha
Excellent Haiku. I love the gentle swaying hammock and the word anticipation is often the high point of any journey. I enjoyed this one very much.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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Excellent Haiku. I love the gentle swaying hammock and the word anticipation is often the high point of any journey. I enjoyed this one very much.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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Thanks...
