My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "And so I stay"a collection of my poetry
59 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I am virtually housebound Patty, I am mainly unable to leave the house due to my anxiety, I really resonated with this and I think this is a great way of educating people as well as writing an excellent poem. Well done this is sensational I think you can excel at many forms of poetry. love Meia xx
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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I am virtually housebound Patty, I am mainly unable to leave the house due to my anxiety, I really resonated with this and I think this is a great way of educating people as well as writing an excellent poem. Well done this is sensational I think you can excel at many forms of poetry. love Meia xx
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you, Meia! I'm so touched by your review. You are probably one of the finest poets I've read on FanStory, and I'm proud that you think I can excel at many forms of poetry - you are an inspiration!
~patty~
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
That was great Patty I loved it, I try all new styles as well, that I never did.
You know I had to look up, what agoraphobic is, I wasn't quit sure. Now that I know, I think I'm agoraphobic too. :)
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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That was great Patty I loved it, I try all new styles as well, that I never did.
You know I had to look up, what agoraphobic is, I wasn't quit sure. Now that I know, I think I'm agoraphobic too. :)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm sorry to hear you're agoraphobic - its a horrible disease.
~patty~
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It is, I had to go out today, the store was so crowded I got a couple of things an left, that's why I usually shop late at night.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's so sad. One of my former inlaws suffered from that. She didn't have much of a life. As far as I can tell you've followed all the rules for this type of poem.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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That's so sad. One of my former inlaws suffered from that. She didn't have much of a life. As far as I can tell you've followed all the rules for this type of poem.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your time and comments,
~patty~
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend you have done well using this form this was how I was feeling as little while ago I felt trapped in my home well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Yes my friend you have done well using this form this was how I was feeling as little while ago I felt trapped in my home well done regards Jill
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review. It means a great deal to me.
~patty!
Comment from robyn corum
Patty,
This is actually one of the best quinzaines that I've seen recently. Kudos, chickee. People will write them from time to time, but they don't often make much sense. Your does, thank goodness! And it meets the criteria! YAY!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Patty,
This is actually one of the best quinzaines that I've seen recently. Kudos, chickee. People will write them from time to time, but they don't often make much sense. Your does, thank goodness! And it meets the criteria! YAY!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review. It means a great deal to me.
~patty!
Comment from Hitcher
I believe this is the first time I've read this form and your notes explain it as clear as day...Congratulations I'd say you have nailed it, well done ! Pleased I'm an outdoors kinda guy, can't imagine never going outside!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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I believe this is the first time I've read this form and your notes explain it as clear as day...Congratulations I'd say you have nailed it, well done ! Pleased I'm an outdoors kinda guy, can't imagine never going outside!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your words of encouragement and praise.
~patty~
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This is a wonderful quinzaine about agoraphobia.
It tells the story of this phobia so well with so few words.
Thanks for sharing
Have a lovely evening
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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This is a wonderful quinzaine about agoraphobia.
It tells the story of this phobia so well with so few words.
Thanks for sharing
Have a lovely evening
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your words of encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a nicely constructed Quinzaine. It is clear and interesting. It states a situation and then asks the question. Timely content, too. If this is your first attempt, excellent job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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This is a nicely constructed Quinzaine. It is clear and interesting. It states a situation and then asks the question. Timely content, too. If this is your first attempt, excellent job. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your words of encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from nuthead
So true! Says a fellow agoraphobic. Nice tight little poem packed with truth.
"The outside world is scary
Is it a wonder
I stay in?"
I hadn't heard of this form before, the Quinzaine. I like it.
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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So true! Says a fellow agoraphobic. Nice tight little poem packed with truth.
"The outside world is scary
Is it a wonder
I stay in?"
I hadn't heard of this form before, the Quinzaine. I like it.
Well done.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for the six stars and a great review. I hope you found comfort from another agoraphobic's words.
~patty~
Comment from patcelaw
Patty, you have done a great job with this format. I like it and it read quite well. Have a blessed weekend, filled with joy unbounding. Patricia
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Patty, you have done a great job with this format. I like it and it read quite well. Have a blessed weekend, filled with joy unbounding. Patricia
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement.
Hope you have a blessed weekend, too.
~patty~
