2017 JAPANESE POETRY
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Comment from Sis Cat
Ha! This made me smile. That's a brand new swimming pool, alright--a redneck rendezvous. Your words are well chosen to accompany your images to create a I-can't-believe-what-I-am-seeing effect. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Ha! This made me smile. That's a brand new swimming pool, alright--a redneck rendezvous. Your words are well chosen to accompany your images to create a I-can't-believe-what-I-am-seeing effect. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you, Andre. You are very kind and I appreciate your good wishes.
Comment from Dean Kuch
That Bubba and Luanne...what a dirty couple, heh-heh-heh.
Okay, in my defense I DO know a little about rednecks, alright? I just happen to be one myself.
I can tell you beyond a shadow of a doubt that they're a dirty couple because they swim in mud!
We have lots of sows, hogs, and pigs here in my neck-of-the-woods (in general, both human and animal...ahem...) , and they like swimmin' in mud too.
Here's hoping that the lovely Luanne, her filthy hubby, and their entire family of inbred rednecks have a grand old time!
This one is actually funny and made me smile, Anonymous Poet. Your syllable count is perfect.
Great alliteration in your last line, too.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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That Bubba and Luanne...what a dirty couple, heh-heh-heh.
Okay, in my defense I DO know a little about rednecks, alright? I just happen to be one myself.
I can tell you beyond a shadow of a doubt that they're a dirty couple because they swim in mud!
We have lots of sows, hogs, and pigs here in my neck-of-the-woods (in general, both human and animal...ahem...) , and they like swimmin' in mud too.
Here's hoping that the lovely Luanne, her filthy hubby, and their entire family of inbred rednecks have a grand old time!
This one is actually funny and made me smile, Anonymous Poet. Your syllable count is perfect.
Great alliteration in your last line, too.
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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You are my favorite redneck, darlin', Thanks a bunch! I love the signature... wow... very impressive and the little gif is adorable.
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You're more than welcome!
Good luck...
~Dean ;)
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thank you, Dean :)
Comment from Sixty70
This should do well in the 5-7-5 humor contest. I know a lot of folks with pools just like this one! One of our neighbors spent a pretty penny on a digger to create an island in the middle of a pond!
Thanks for writing and best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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This should do well in the 5-7-5 humor contest. I know a lot of folks with pools just like this one! One of our neighbors spent a pretty penny on a digger to create an island in the middle of a pond!
Thanks for writing and best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Hahaha... I just love redneck folk. They are funny and have strong family values. I have a close friend from Ohio. He is nothing like the stereotype but he cracks me up telling me their ways and way of talking. Thank you very much. :)
