Fun in the Sun
A Trinet4 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I like your descriptive poem and I enjoyed reading it. It made me hungry and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Good alliteration of words grass grows. Good luck in the contest.
angel123
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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I like your descriptive poem and I enjoyed reading it. It made me hungry and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Good alliteration of words grass grows. Good luck in the contest.
angel123
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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I thank you very much!
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I think you did very well completing the challenge of the contest.lowed line to line with the words combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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A well-written contest entry. I think you did very well completing the challenge of the contest.lowed line to line with the words combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Cass Carlton
I am unfamiliar with the design of the poem so I don't feel qualified to comment on that, but the content is delightful. A picnic with children and puppies and swings. And Ham sandwiches! Yum! My favorite . With Camembert cheese and lots of lettuce.
Ahem- I digress. The poem ends with a sudden rain shower drawing the day's fun to a close. A good progression from start to finish. Well done cheers Cass
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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I am unfamiliar with the design of the poem so I don't feel qualified to comment on that, but the content is delightful. A picnic with children and puppies and swings. And Ham sandwiches! Yum! My favorite . With Camembert cheese and lots of lettuce.
Ahem- I digress. The poem ends with a sudden rain shower drawing the day's fun to a close. A good progression from start to finish. Well done cheers Cass
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thank you! After this nice review. I want a sandwich now!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
AN excellent contest entry. The wondrous days of summer, especially when you're young. Was anything ever more fun that being a child in summer?
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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AN excellent contest entry. The wondrous days of summer, especially when you're young. Was anything ever more fun that being a child in summer?
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your positive thoughts!
