Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

This is an awesome poem about the love for your husband. Living in that one perfect of moment of pure peace. Nothing is in the world matters but this one moment. Great job. I wish I had a six for you.

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'll take a virtual six any day - I appreciate your kind thoughts,
~patty~

Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

Oh that is just sweet. I just read your lonely poem and now must assume he is home. I feel this way about both my husbands. The first passed away at an early age, and I hate to say it, he is still in my heart and dreams. First true love.
hugs Heidi

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017

Thank you, Heidi, for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the poem.
~patty~

Comment from Ella25

Excellent

The love poem is nicely composed. The rhyming and flow are excellent in each stanza. Perhaps I would use a different image as somehow doesn't reflect the poem the right way. Well done. With love, Ella

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I appreciate your comments,
~patty~

reply by Ella25 on 02-Mar-2017

You are welcome, Patty. Have a great day. Ella

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Patty, that was a beautifully romantic poem.
It was from the heart, It flowed nicely.
I'm sure your husband was honored you
wrote this for him.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments.
~patty~

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 02-Mar-2017

your welcome

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Love the artwork! This is a sweet and romantic poem about spending time with your husband. I bet he liked the time and the poem.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017

thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~

Comment from sue133

Excellent

This is so good. The first two lines just capture the feeling of your whole poem. It is romantic and beautifully written with great rhyming.Congratulations. Susan

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I appreciate your comments,
~patty~

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Nicely said, Patty. Sometimes, certain things are best said simply, and my motto is, the simplest things in life are worth the most, so seeing through those eyes, I value what you wrote here.
A lovely tribute to hubby.
Best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017

Thank you for your time to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

And I bet he loved it! What a lovely romantic poem, it must have been for valentines day. Well done, I really enjoyed it. :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fabulous tribute to your wonderful husband, I believed every word as they all came from your heart, a great free verse poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

I believe that two people are connected at the heart, and it doesn't matter what you do, or who you are or where you live; there are no boundaries or barriers if two people are destined to be together. This is what your poem brings to mind for me - thanks for sharing.
Wishing you the best...
Bill~

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the poem,
~patty~