Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "haiku (male penguin)*"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
47 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Indianalrish. Excellent Haiku and great Satori, what a marvelous animal we learn lots from these Haiku's and authors notes i thought this was great Cheers Christineð???
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Hi Indianalrish. Excellent Haiku and great Satori, what a marvelous animal we learn lots from these Haiku's and authors notes i thought this was great Cheers Christineð???
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Thamks for your kind review and comments for my penguin haiku, Chrissy. I appreciate your response, and so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Lu Saluna
Oh! I love penguins, they are adorable! I Think they are the best. Talk about an equal partnership, dad doing his fair share of the parenting, what a guy.
I love your haiku, very adorable. Nicely done!
Here you go
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Oh! I love penguins, they are adorable! I Think they are the best. Talk about an equal partnership, dad doing his fair share of the parenting, what a guy.
I love your haiku, very adorable. Nicely done!
Here you go
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Oh, I love your little animated penguin, Lu!! Thanks so much for sending it to me. Thanks, too, for your review and comments for my haiku. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. They're such cool dudes, those daddy penguins.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
That was adorable, I love penguins, so cute.
The last line was my favorite ,baby daddy :)
The picture went so perfect.
That
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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That was adorable, I love penguins, so cute.
The last line was my favorite ,baby daddy :)
The picture went so perfect.
That
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Kerry, for your review and comments for my penguin haiku. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for mentioning you liked "baby dddy". I truly appreciate your kind response.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
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Your very welcome
Comment from mermaids
Love your poem. The male penguin is a "baby daddy". Your words create a clear pic of the penguin and make the reader smile. I did watch a show on Nat Geo about the penguin fathers.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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Love your poem. The male penguin is a "baby daddy". Your words create a clear pic of the penguin and make the reader smile. I did watch a show on Nat Geo about the penguin fathers.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your great review and comments for my penguin haiku, mermaids. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem, and I truly appreciate your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from TAB_that's me
I love 'baby daddy' used in this way. It is nice to find an occasional male animal that cares for the young or eggs.
Enjoyed the haiku:)
teresa
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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I love 'baby daddy' used in this way. It is nice to find an occasional male animal that cares for the young or eggs.
Enjoyed the haiku:)
teresa
Comment Written 23-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your great review and comments for my penguin haiku, Teresa. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem, and I truly appreciate your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the picture and the penguins, too.
-Have seen nature specials on these, and they are
unbelievable.
-You have the required elements for haiku.
-The description of the male protecting the egg is good.
-Nice satori.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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-I love the picture and the penguins, too.
-Have seen nature specials on these, and they are
unbelievable.
-You have the required elements for haiku.
-The description of the male protecting the egg is good.
-Nice satori.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your great review and comments for my penguin haiku, mermaids. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem, and I truly appreciate your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
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You are welcome, Karyn.
Comment from rspoet
This is a haiku with excellent imagery and connection
in the penguin/egg, and a cute satori line
Even though they don't fly, penguins are birds
so it may have to go in a different chapter
I've seen several Nature movies/shows on the Emperor Penguin,
the brutal conditions they've learned to withstand are incredible.
The adaption behavior is amazing, and one advantage,
no predators in the winter.
Excellent picture and haiku
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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This is a haiku with excellent imagery and connection
in the penguin/egg, and a cute satori line
Even though they don't fly, penguins are birds
so it may have to go in a different chapter
I've seen several Nature movies/shows on the Emperor Penguin,
the brutal conditions they've learned to withstand are incredible.
The adaption behavior is amazing, and one advantage,
no predators in the winter.
Excellent picture and haiku
Comment Written 23-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your great review and comments for my penguin haiku, mermaids. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem, and I truly appreciate your kind response.After 37 reviewers, I was reminded penguins are birds. LOL The bird chapter is closed for the haiku challenge, so have to remove this and write one about a real mammal. I'm so embarrassed.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Susanjohn
That's right!!! The dads have to do all the work while the moms are out swimming for food!!! How clever you!!! hahahahaha BABY DADDY!!!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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That's right!!! The dads have to do all the work while the moms are out swimming for food!!! How clever you!!! hahahahaha BABY DADDY!!!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your great review and comments for my penguin haiku, Susan. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem, and I truly appreciate your wonderful response. Your hahaha is the best compliment I could receive.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi IndianaIrish - this is a good haiku with lines one and two interconnecting perfectly and your line three is a good and informative satori. Yes, male penguins are the ones that look after the new born penguins. A good addition to the book. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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Hi IndianaIrish - this is a good haiku with lines one and two interconnecting perfectly and your line three is a good and informative satori. Yes, male penguins are the ones that look after the new born penguins. A good addition to the book. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your great review and comments for my penguin haiku, Dorothy. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem, and I truly appreciate your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I read about that somewhere, they are incredible creatures, aren't they. Can you imagine a human father doing that while the wife nips down the pub and has wine and a nice meal while dad minds the egg? LOL, now that would be good. This is so good, Karyn, and I love the picture with daddy looking down at the egg. Well done and well done on the challenge. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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I read about that somewhere, they are incredible creatures, aren't they. Can you imagine a human father doing that while the wife nips down the pub and has wine and a nice meal while dad minds the egg? LOL, now that would be good. This is so good, Karyn, and I love the picture with daddy looking down at the egg. Well done and well done on the challenge. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks for your great review and comments for my penguin haiku, Sandra. I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem, and thank you for your kind response. LOL I loved your comments!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
