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A Feast for the Senses

...sugar and spice and everything nice!

5 total reviews 
Comment from Ogden
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A Haiku in Fall-figured dress, so to speak. "Gilded with gold" is a very nice touch of the season. Good work!

Now I want some pumpkin pie. I have to see wat's in the fridge.

Don

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2017

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    Thanks!
Comment from winnona
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A well-written contest entry. The artwork and background color completed the piece well. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest.You have captured the feeling of Autumn in a few words.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2017

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    Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This ode to autumn, A Feast For the Senses, has a nice message, but there are too many syllables in the first line. Your 5-7-5 is currently a 7-7-5. If you lose the word 'baking', that will put you back on track. Happy day.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
    Copied and pasted wrong. Have revised it. Thanks!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written an original approach to the contest beautifully displayed and syllable count is correct good luck in the contest regards Jill

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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    Thank you!
Comment from William Ross
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Pumpkin pie and spiced apple cider, sounds good to me. a good autumn 5.7.5. thanks for the share and good luck on this. have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
    Thank you!