My Heart Bleeds
...when hatred prevails4 total reviews
Comment from angel123
You did very well with expressing a complete thought with just a few words. I like your poem. It flows well with an interesting insight about the relationship between people heart and flowers. Your artwork choice enhances your poem.
angel123
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
You did very well with expressing a complete thought with just a few words. I like your poem. It flows well with an interesting insight about the relationship between people heart and flowers. Your artwork choice enhances your poem.
angel123
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from suemac
What a beautiful picture and goes with the poem, really well,Lovely poetry simple,true,less is more in this case.Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
What a beautiful picture and goes with the poem, really well,Lovely poetry simple,true,less is more in this case.Well done.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Lu Saluna
Very sad when families are torn apart. One would think families above all, would learn to forgive one another.
A very good Senyru - speaks to the pain and anguish of the heart
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
Very sad when families are torn apart. One would think families above all, would learn to forgive one another.
A very good Senyru - speaks to the pain and anguish of the heart
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you !
Comment from tfawcus
True enough! We all bleed much the same in times of sorrow and adversity, regardless of race, colour or creed. The brotherhood of man is a concept worth making peace for. I almost said 'fighting for' - but there's enough of that already.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
True enough! We all bleed much the same in times of sorrow and adversity, regardless of race, colour or creed. The brotherhood of man is a concept worth making peace for. I almost said 'fighting for' - but there's enough of that already.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your insightful review.