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Senryu3 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Your poem is interesting and well written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Good luck in the contest.
angel123
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Your poem is interesting and well written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Good luck in the contest.
angel123
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed your senryu with the correct number of syllables. I found it rather deep and meaningful., especially with the social media standing by.
Congratulations.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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I enjoyed your senryu with the correct number of syllables. I found it rather deep and meaningful., especially with the social media standing by.
Congratulations.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Great review zanya
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent and topical entry for the contest
An excellent senryu in the 5-7-5 form
with good use of alliteration
Many will relate to this poem
Well done with interesting art work
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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This is an excellent and topical entry for the contest
An excellent senryu in the 5-7-5 form
with good use of alliteration
Many will relate to this poem
Well done with interesting art work
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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great review -thanks for reading zanya
