House of dreams
Just a poem 8 /6 /8 /645 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
A wonderful dream world fit for "Luna".
Very nice abab rhyme in 8-6-8-6 meter.
Perfect artwork to accompany this piece.
Well done Jeni.
Blessings
Janet
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A wonderful dream world fit for "Luna".
Very nice abab rhyme in 8-6-8-6 meter.
Perfect artwork to accompany this piece.
Well done Jeni.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
Comment from mvbrooks
This sounds like a wonderful adventure that -- at least for the length of the poem--the reader gets to share. The rhyme is consistent and smooth and the story very inviting.
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This sounds like a wonderful adventure that -- at least for the length of the poem--the reader gets to share. The rhyme is consistent and smooth and the story very inviting.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
Comment from Franklin Price
A great poem of the wonders of a dream world. The rhyme and flow is wonderful.
Luna has done well again guiding you through another imaginative world. Keep her close. She's doing a real good job.
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A great poem of the wonders of a dream world. The rhyme and flow is wonderful.
Luna has done well again guiding you through another imaginative world. Keep her close. She's doing a real good job.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a dreamy, imaginative poem of space travel. I am reminded of my own dreams of space travel. Poem resembles a bedtime story told to a child. The two-headed Conquistador reminded me of how the Native Americans who first encountered men on horseback thought they were a two-headed monster.
Thank you for sharing your dream.
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This is a dreamy, imaginative poem of space travel. I am reminded of my own dreams of space travel. Poem resembles a bedtime story told to a child. The two-headed Conquistador reminded me of how the Native Americans who first encountered men on horseback thought they were a two-headed monster.
Thank you for sharing your dream.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
Comment from Ella25
It's beautiful, Jeni. The house of dreams you built among the stars and duskiest night. Shining Luna by your side you reverie of paradise. Between the constellations, you swing, like the fairy flying high. Superb art. With love, Ella
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It's beautiful, Jeni. The house of dreams you built among the stars and duskiest night. Shining Luna by your side you reverie of paradise. Between the constellations, you swing, like the fairy flying high. Superb art. With love, Ella
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
Comment from Donya Quijote
A magical, sentimental journey through the imagination. It is such a wonderful place to escape to. Smooth flow and gentle rhymes make this poem a good read. Well done write...
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A magical, sentimental journey through the imagination. It is such a wonderful place to escape to. Smooth flow and gentle rhymes make this poem a good read. Well done write...
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
The poem captivates the imagination, and the reader can feel themselves swept away on the wings of Pegasus. All too soon, the adventure is over, and we are left on the ground, longing to be atop the winged creature.
Thank you for sharing this well-penned piece. It brightened my Sunday morning.
~patty~
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The poem captivates the imagination, and the reader can feel themselves swept away on the wings of Pegasus. All too soon, the adventure is over, and we are left on the ground, longing to be atop the winged creature.
Thank you for sharing this well-penned piece. It brightened my Sunday morning.
~patty~
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
Comment from azwildrosa
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Another great read. Your stanza flow so beautifully and are always full of great images. I love the wing-ed horse, a fun image pops up with him. This is a fun read. One I can read again and again to find a fun time. Thank you again for a great share. I look forward to reading more.
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Another great read. Your stanza flow so beautifully and are always full of great images. I love the wing-ed horse, a fun image pops up with him. This is a fun read. One I can read again and again to find a fun time. Thank you again for a great share. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
Comment from William Ross
Nicely rhymed quatrains with a good meter and structure it reads really well, ddream scan be fun. thanks for the share and have a great day
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Nicely rhymed quatrains with a good meter and structure it reads really well, ddream scan be fun. thanks for the share and have a great day
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
Comment from Pantygynt
As long as Pegasus remains entire we should have no trouble. It is when the nightmares come galloping in that sleep and dreamland become less inviting. I thoroughly enjoyed this sweet little piece.
Please get in touch as soon as possible re the class. I hope you are feeling better.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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As long as Pegasus remains entire we should have no trouble. It is when the nightmares come galloping in that sleep and dreamland become less inviting. I thoroughly enjoyed this sweet little piece.
Please get in touch as soon as possible re the class. I hope you are feeling better.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Jim, for such a kind review.
Unfortunately I have had to get a l lung biopsy and will have to have other tests when the results return. I should be in the hospital at least another couple of weeks.
I'll try to get in touch prior to my departure!
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Right. I understand, and here is what I suggest, because I think it would be a waste of your money already spent to join a four week class in its third week. I can offer you a choice for no extra expenditure. 1. There will be another European Forms 1. class in the autumn. You could join that. The next class will be "Free Verse" starting on Friday 31st March and ending 28th April. You could join that. The one after that will be European Forms 2. Starting Friday 12th May and ending 9th June. There is no necessity to have taken the earlier European forms class though this one will include some of the more difficult forms such as Pantoum and Sestina. You could join that. Whichever you decide to do I will inform Tom, and remind him that you have already paid, and not been able to take up your seat. I have already done this with one other hospitalised member, and there was no problem. Just let me know as soon as possible what you would like to do and I will take care of it from there on in.
You just need to concentrate on getting well again.
