Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose for your poem
It is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Even with the black dot of black bird the artwork stills look nice.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

reply by misscookie on 24-Feb-2017

You're very welcome, have a nice week-end.
Cookie

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

We don't have frost or ice covered trees, but I had a ton of birds in my magnolias the other evening and Harley decided they didn't need to be there. Oh my! there was such a racket. I wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

:-) WONDERFUL!!!

Love your satori "flocked", encompassing both the bird swarm and
the texture of the trees :-) :-) :-)

magnificently done Debbie!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Just perfect! 'Flocked'...how totally original, and the exact opposite of the usual, flocked in white. I love this!! Blessings..

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A nicely composed haiku accompanied by a beautiful image.
The word "flocked" creates an image for the reader when branches
are covered with snow. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nice, black birds flocked on frost covered tree branches. A good haiku, fits the challenge. Nicely done. thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Debbie, nice strong haiku, loved the images especially in this one - you made me see them as if outside my window.
Thanks for sharing.
m

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend. Take care~Debbie

Comment from Realist101

Exceptional

Oh nice! I love the last line/word. Perfect Debbie. I love haiku but some don't make any sense. Yours does. I do wish this were in a contest, it's really good. :) Hugs, S.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017

Thank you again, my friend~Debbie

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Debbie!

I enjoyed your blackbirds haiku. Flocked is a good description of them up I'm that tree.

Thanks for sharing!

Kim

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Yes Debbie,
the image set up the visual, but the use and construction of this beautiful Haiku solidified all intention... magic!

I see the challenge title is five birds... hmmmm, maybe that's per limb? Smile)))))))))))))))))))!

Wonderfully composed and presented dear friend!

With our thoughts we create,
'blackbirds singing in the dead of night'.
James vx's.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Hi, dear friend. So glad to here from you as always. Glad you enjoyed my wacky bird haiku. Take care, my friend. Thank you~Debbie
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