Truth and Fantasy
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Granny Smith"Short stories
8 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I'm still laughing--"Bite Me!" Great ending to your creative write on Granny Smith apples. That's a great apple and yes they are a bit tart. Good job with this. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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I'm still laughing--"Bite Me!" Great ending to your creative write on Granny Smith apples. That's a great apple and yes they are a bit tart. Good job with this. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing this poem..I wasn't too sure how it would be received. Anyway, I'm so glad you liked the read. I appreciate your kind review and stars.
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Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing this poem..I wasn't too sure how it would be received. Anyway, I'm so glad you liked the read. I appreciate your kind review and stars.
Comment from lyenochka
This represents the tart attitude of the Granny Smith apple very well. That's good to know that the acidity keeps the flesh "white" but I know some sweet ones which do, too. Great personification!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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This represents the tart attitude of the Granny Smith apple very well. That's good to know that the acidity keeps the flesh "white" but I know some sweet ones which do, too. Great personification!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thanks ! I appreciate the review and rating.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha this was a fun write. I can see how you used the traits of the apple to describe you. Good job with that as per rules. Some describe the apple & not include themselves. You did as required. Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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haha this was a fun write. I can see how you used the traits of the apple to describe you. Good job with that as per rules. Some describe the apple & not include themselves. You did as required. Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the good wishes. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. It certainly was fun to personify the apple, but that's not my real personality. I really appreciate your kind review and stars.....Trisha
Comment from frogbook
I love this one-it is really cute and funny, most especially that last line. A rather devilish little piece that suited the contest so well. Seems like a winner to me.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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I love this one-it is really cute and funny, most especially that last line. A rather devilish little piece that suited the contest so well. Seems like a winner to me.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thanks, frogbook (neat pseudonym) this kind of style was fun to write too..Develish I like!!! I appreciate your great review and stars. My real reward is the feedback that people enjoy my penning. Stars are only like a currency.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hi Bucketlist,
This is a delightful entry for the 'What kind of apple are you' contest. I love the cheeky nature and spunk of this apple. Your poem made me laugh! Strong closing line with "BITE ME". :-)
This is a fun, enjoyable read! Very creative!
Good luck in the contest!
Connie
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Hi Bucketlist,
This is a delightful entry for the 'What kind of apple are you' contest. I love the cheeky nature and spunk of this apple. Your poem made me laugh! Strong closing line with "BITE ME". :-)
This is a fun, enjoyable read! Very creative!
Good luck in the contest!
Connie
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Hurray! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Connie. I do have some devilish cheek left in me! Thanks so much for reviewing and the stars. Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I did not get this in a message so had to go find it. Are you getting mine? I will deleate you and add again and see if it fixes. This is cute and one of my favorite
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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I did not get this in a message so had to go find it. Are you getting mine? I will deleate you and add again and see if it fixes. This is cute and one of my favorite
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks, but it will be for fun! I write primarily for expressive outlet, but reader enjoyment means more.. Contests are brain
stimulation - important for my age LOL
Thanks for checking, reviewing, and ye old stars
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Your use of description, veiled by self examination, is incredibly well crafted. It is funny and carefree. I love the contest and your entry in it. Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Your use of description, veiled by self examination, is incredibly well crafted. It is funny and carefree. I love the contest and your entry in it. Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Rhonda, have you heard of 'always a bridesmaid, never a bride' ? Well .........that's me in contests LOL. Thanks for the super review and stars. Enjoy a poetic day !
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That's why I hardly ever enter one. I used to all the time, and I'd win some and lose some, and found I was a whole lot happier when I didn't have to worry about winning. haha. I used to love it!
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Ahhh yes, stress relief!! I am still seeing how the system runs, and what to do. I usually end up with the free ones, otherwise it gets $$ thanks, Rhonda
Comment from valmay
This is a good entry to the competition. The tart while hot with whipped cream was a lot of fun. Hope you keep your flesh crisp as your writing. Good luck
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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This is a good entry to the competition. The tart while hot with whipped cream was a lot of fun. Hope you keep your flesh crisp as your writing. Good luck
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Oh good , I'm glad you enjoyed the 'naughty' implication. LOL Thanks very much for positive reviewing and five stars
