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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "haiku--glasswing butterfly"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
47 total reviews
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
How good scenery you have portrayed, I really loved the use of glasswing and rain forest, and sometimes even rainbow post rain
Thanks for sharing such good imagery
Have a nice day
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
How good scenery you have portrayed, I really loved the use of glasswing and rain forest, and sometimes even rainbow post rain
Thanks for sharing such good imagery
Have a nice day
Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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I'm pleased you enjoyed my butterfly haiku, Lova Vijay Kumar, and thank you for your kind review and response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from irishauthorme
I am continually amazed at you talent for mixing the natural, simplistic world around us with your own karma, thus metamorphosing a verse, a picture, into a complicated, thought provoking message.
Ah, but isn't it a sublime pain to but pulled into this thought pattern?
irish
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
I am continually amazed at you talent for mixing the natural, simplistic world around us with your own karma, thus metamorphosing a verse, a picture, into a complicated, thought provoking message.
Ah, but isn't it a sublime pain to but pulled into this thought pattern?
irish
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Your reviews are always so supportive and encouraging, Irish, and I truly appreciate your feedback for my writing. Thank you, thank you, thank you for the generous gold star! I'm glad you enjoyed the haiku, Irish, and even more glad you had the time to read no share your thoughts.
Smiles,
Sassy :-)
Comment from sue133
This is so simple and a perfect haiku. The butterfly is such a delicate, wonderful creature and you have caught those thoughts in your poem. A beautifully written piece. Susan
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
This is so simple and a perfect haiku. The butterfly is such a delicate, wonderful creature and you have caught those thoughts in your poem. A beautifully written piece. Susan
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Susan, for this lovely review for my butterfly haiku. I truly appreciate your kind comments and encouragement. Thank you for your great response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from tfawcus
A stunning example of nature's delicate magnificence brought to life vividly in your haiku. Your last line definitely produces that ah-ha moment! Subtle punning.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
A stunning example of nature's delicate magnificence brought to life vividly in your haiku. Your last line definitely produces that ah-ha moment! Subtle punning.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much, Tony, for your kind review and comments for my butterfly haiku. I truly appreciate your encouraging response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Hitcher
The artwork is awesome and fits like a glove to your well crafted little Haiku friend, I do recall you being a bit of a grandmaster when it came to these delicate little forms. Very Nice !
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
The artwork is awesome and fits like a glove to your well crafted little Haiku friend, I do recall you being a bit of a grandmaster when it came to these delicate little forms. Very Nice !
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks for your kind review and compliments for my butterfly haiku, Hitch.,always ppreciTe your comments and encouraging response.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment from Leineco
absolutely lovely, IndianIrish - as graceful as the crystal paned butterfly
and your satori serves double duty. . .just like her pair of wings -
they do, indeed, make for a lovely window to peer into/through to view
the rain forest. . .and to represent the fragile status of all life forms in
this intricate biosphere.
nicely done :-)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
absolutely lovely, IndianIrish - as graceful as the crystal paned butterfly
and your satori serves double duty. . .just like her pair of wings -
they do, indeed, make for a lovely window to peer into/through to view
the rain forest. . .and to represent the fragile status of all life forms in
this intricate biosphere.
nicely done :-)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
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You always write wonderful reviews, Leineco, and I truly appreciate your comments and encouragement. Thank you for reading and sharing your feedback. I'm delighted you liked this butterfly haiku.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment from Susanjohn
Rain forest window??????? Girl what goes on in that beautiful mind of yours!!! loved your little poem!! so enjoyed reading!! :-))))
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
Rain forest window??????? Girl what goes on in that beautiful mind of yours!!! loved your little poem!! so enjoyed reading!! :-))))
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
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LOL I get lucky with the things that pop into my head sometimes. Thank you, Susan, for your great review and comments for my butterfly haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. Thanks!
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Loved this haiku, the glasswing butterfly is really beautiful.
Very clever the way you have captured both the image and survival hopes in the environment in which it lives.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
Loved this haiku, the glasswing butterfly is really beautiful.
Very clever the way you have captured both the image and survival hopes in the environment in which it lives.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
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Thank you, YNWA, for your great review and comments for my butterfly haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. Thanks!
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
Fragile! You're not joking. That's really something...although (dare I say it? Yeah, what the heck...) it looks more like a moth to me than a butterfly... NOT that I'm any expert on things fluttery...
Anyway, on a more serious note... We're up to chapter 9 of this hair-do book thing. Will there be a murder soon? Some hot sex? Drug smuggling or gun-running?
No? Really? Oh...
Oh well. carry on...
The Manly Ant xx
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
Fragile! You're not joking. That's really something...although (dare I say it? Yeah, what the heck...) it looks more like a moth to me than a butterfly... NOT that I'm any expert on things fluttery...
Anyway, on a more serious note... We're up to chapter 9 of this hair-do book thing. Will there be a murder soon? Some hot sex? Drug smuggling or gun-running?
No? Really? Oh...
Oh well. carry on...
The Manly Ant xx
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
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LOL! A moth? I guess there are some moths that have some beautiful color, but butterflies are prettier flutteries.
Thanks for reading my hair-do poems, AntMan. Hoping the sponsor's will choose my poems for the book they are publishing. So, no sex or Steven Seagal action scenes...unless I write a haiku about a praying mantis who has wild sex in the woods and she chomps his head off as part of the after sex glow.
Thanks, TheManlyAnt. You make me laugh and I like to laugh.
Smiles,
Kazz :-)
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Yeah..the moth remark was just to get your hackles up. I've got a weird sense of humour.
I'd like to see a hair-do about that praying mantus. I dare you. I'd also like to see how you manage it in 6 words! There's a challenge for you...
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Six words?? Challenge accepted. LOL
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It'll probably be guaranteed a spot in that hair-do book thingy, anyway.
Can't wait!
The Ant from Manly xx
Comment from Lu Saluna
This is very beautiful. I love the vivid imagery I get from the first two lines. Very good concrete image. Your satori is wonderful "rainforest window"
That is just grand! It is a stunning butterfly, I would love to see one in person.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
This is very beautiful. I love the vivid imagery I get from the first two lines. Very good concrete image. Your satori is wonderful "rainforest window"
That is just grand! It is a stunning butterfly, I would love to see one in person.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
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I'd love to see one, too! Thank you, Lu, for your great review and comments for my butterfly haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. Thanks!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)