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8 total reviews
Comment from Muffins
The dialogue is scandalous and raw. Two powerful women, two iconic players in the cartoon world are not afraid, the seem almost to happy, to spill the beans about they work with and share their private lives with. Although it may be the booze talking but the back and forth, exposed a common bond between them. They're women who know the game and are not going to be kicked out of it quietly.
Enjoyed this.
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The dialogue is scandalous and raw. Two powerful women, two iconic players in the cartoon world are not afraid, the seem almost to happy, to spill the beans about they work with and share their private lives with. Although it may be the booze talking but the back and forth, exposed a common bond between them. They're women who know the game and are not going to be kicked out of it quietly.
Enjoyed this.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
mikey, you have outdone yourself with this one. Great writing. I love this image--He farts all night and it makes the dog cry. Farts, snores, and sleeps with a pipe in his mouth. Awesome potlatch challenge piece, my friend. You get better and better!~Debbie
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mikey, you have outdone yourself with this one. Great writing. I love this image--He farts all night and it makes the dog cry. Farts, snores, and sleeps with a pipe in his mouth. Awesome potlatch challenge piece, my friend. You get better and better!~Debbie
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
Comment from LIJ Red
I remember Sea Hag and the Vultures and all the gang. Betty once had a porno doppelganger. This is well written and causes grins.
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I remember Sea Hag and the Vultures and all the gang. Betty once had a porno doppelganger. This is well written and causes grins.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
I do not know why, but I get the biggest kick out of your little scripts or scenarios as I like to call them. This is a kick,dude. I can just see them gossiping away with Olive being a lightweight and passing out. I hope you do more of these. So many characters could wander in. Dudley Do Right!!! Betty would blow his mind and, well...Anyway, more!!!!!
NG
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I do not know why, but I get the biggest kick out of your little scripts or scenarios as I like to call them. This is a kick,dude. I can just see them gossiping away with Olive being a lightweight and passing out. I hope you do more of these. So many characters could wander in. Dudley Do Right!!! Betty would blow his mind and, well...Anyway, more!!!!!
NG
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
So much gossip to take in from these two ladies, LOL.Well done with this one mikey- farts, snores and sleeps with a pipe - so many secrets coming out. Fun read, and a good ending leaving us all imagining those spinach farts.
cheers,
valda
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So much gossip to take in from these two ladies, LOL.Well done with this one mikey- farts, snores and sleeps with a pipe - so many secrets coming out. Fun read, and a good ending leaving us all imagining those spinach farts.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
Comment from emptypage
This was fun AND funny.
"He farts all night and it makes the dog cry." I squirted Dr. Pepper out of my nose. You owe me a keyboard!
Good stuff. I really like it.
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This was fun AND funny.
"He farts all night and it makes the dog cry." I squirted Dr. Pepper out of my nose. You owe me a keyboard!
Good stuff. I really like it.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
Comment from William Ross
hahahah Betty boop and olive oyle 2 old cartoon characters,Betty boop a sexy vixen, and olive a string bean. brutus gay hahaha. Popeye a gas bag. good fun and humorous piece.Thanks for the share and have a good day
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hahahah Betty boop and olive oyle 2 old cartoon characters,Betty boop a sexy vixen, and olive a string bean. brutus gay hahaha. Popeye a gas bag. good fun and humorous piece.Thanks for the share and have a good day
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a great job of bringing Betty Boop and Olive to life. This was a fun read and very funny. Totally unexpected! The use of a script works well and you did a great job with the contest goals. Well done.
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I thought you did a great job of bringing Betty Boop and Olive to life. This was a fun read and very funny. Totally unexpected! The use of a script works well and you did a great job with the contest goals. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
