Comment from Zue65

Excellent

You followed exactly the syllabic patterns in writing an Essence poem and you executed it well. The art work amplified the message you want to drive to the readers. Thanks for sharing.

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks for a wonderful review.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

A fantastic write, short, sweet, simple and effective.I thought it was a very clever competition entry so well done and good luck kindest regards Meia :0)

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks for the wonderful review and the good luck wishes.

Comment from Franklin Price

Excellent

Great poem with a great picture. I looked very closely and the fog is definitely hiding the frog on the log...great rhyme and alliteration..Another quote I have for you poem is...ribbitt!!!...straight from the frog's mouth.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Haha, thanks for a very funny review. Nobody's found that frog yet, including me. He's well hidden.

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

You poem follows the rules of an essence poem perfectly and in so doing gives a delightful, succinct image. It is wonderful to see that few words can paint a complete picture. Good choice of illustration. I can almost hear the frog.

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed my little poem.

Comment from azwildrosa

Excellent

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What a great little poem you have here. I love the pictures it complements the poem well. Your created a perfect little picture as well. Your title is great. I love frogs so it made me hop on in to have a read. Thank you for sharing. This is a great essence poem. Great entry for this prompt. Best wishes to you in the booth.

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks for the wonderful review and the good wishes in the contest. So glad you enjoyed my little poem.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi - this is very clever. Two lines with six syllables each line. To make sense of a poem with such restriction is not easy you have done so and it rhymes. Well done. Love the picture but not very foggy LOL. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks. Yes, these little poems are harder than they look, but they're fun. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good on the prompt with this fits like a tee, good rhyming on the couplet . This should do do real well,best of luck and have a good day

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks, and you have a good day too.

Comment from MsPetra

Excellent

You've done an excellent job with this. I liked what you had to say and you said it with so few words. You've held true to form. Well done on that regard. There isn't anything I would have done differently. Please keep writing. I am looking forward to your next offering.
Best of luck in the contest.

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked my little poem.

Comment from ruzu27

Excellent

After joining a rhyme class last month, I love your examples with end and internal rhymes. Excellent art work. Well done. I wish you all the best for the competition.

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks for the wonderful review. So glad you enjoyed my fun little poem.

Comment from Aiona

Exceptional

LOL! Bonus points for you. You got TWO internal rhymes and one ending rhyme. Two lines of six syllables each fit the format of the contest. And just funny as can be!

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017

Thanks for the six! I'm thrilled you liked it that much. It was a fun little poem to write.