nature's frieze
septolet poem6 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
What a lovely septolet. It follows the 14-word format, two sections, both dealing with a description of the loveliest parts of summer. Thank you!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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What a lovely septolet. It follows the 14-word format, two sections, both dealing with a description of the loveliest parts of summer. Thank you!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging review. This photo is very similar to my Vermont forest pond. Magical late afternoons, cheers, j
Comment from angel123
Your artwork choice goes beautifully with the message of your nature poem. Your nature poem flows and rhymes well and I like your background color, as well. Good luck in the contest.
angel123
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Your artwork choice goes beautifully with the message of your nature poem. Your nature poem flows and rhymes well and I like your background color, as well. Good luck in the contest.
angel123
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the review, cheers, j
Comment from winnona
a well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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a well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the review, cheers, j
Comment from Bobbi22
Your septolet paints a beautiful picture of the summer sun setting against the emerald palette of the earth. Very well written, Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Your septolet paints a beautiful picture of the summer sun setting against the emerald palette of the earth. Very well written, Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I have a forest pond in Vermont and I love my peaceful evening dip. Cheers, j
Comment from rspoet
This looks like a fine entry for the contest
but should be in two parts, not three
I'd eliminate one of the blank lines
Otherwise a fine Septolet poem of nature
with excellent imagery
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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This looks like a fine entry for the contest
but should be in two parts, not three
I'd eliminate one of the blank lines
Otherwise a fine Septolet poem of nature
with excellent imagery
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the review and advice. Not my favorite style, but I try any poem once, cheers, j
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
So much imagery in this poem with the rhyme it reads beautifully I enjoyed my friend you have done well good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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So much imagery in this poem with the rhyme it reads beautifully I enjoyed my friend you have done well good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I have a forest pond in vermont and it is magical on a summer afternoon.Cheers, j
