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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "haiku (tropical dream)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
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Comment from Rasmine
Good haiku!! Love the butterfly picture, too! See-thru wings. I'll see you on Tuesday evening.
I will look at everyone's haiku now. :D
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Good haiku!! Love the butterfly picture, too! See-thru wings. I'll see you on Tuesday evening.
I will look at everyone's haiku now. :D
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
Thank you, Rasmine, you are very kind and honest with your reviews. I deeply appreciate it. I look forward seeing you.
Blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Haiku Society of America member
Comment from Leineco
Ahhhh, Gypsy. . .the gorgeous and enchanting Glass-winged butterfly. . .
Isn't it amazing - the works of art Mother Nature's soul creates? :-)
I love the idea of susurrus here. . .it so softly reflects the constant hum
of nature's tiniest creatures that underscore and epitomize summer.
Very nicely said :-)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Ahhhh, Gypsy. . .the gorgeous and enchanting Glass-winged butterfly. . .
Isn't it amazing - the works of art Mother Nature's soul creates? :-)
I love the idea of susurrus here. . .it so softly reflects the constant hum
of nature's tiniest creatures that underscore and epitomize summer.
Very nicely said :-)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
Thank you, sweetie pie, you are very kind and honest with your reviews. I deeply appreciate it.
Blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Haiku Society of America member
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy. what a beautiful picture sweet girl...nature is a beautiful cinema in itself...breathtaking with every season...love your poem you...and love you...Linda xoox
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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HI Gypsy. what a beautiful picture sweet girl...nature is a beautiful cinema in itself...breathtaking with every season...love your poem you...and love you...Linda xoox
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review.
Peace be with you, luv ya'
Gypsy Blue Rose
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Haiku Society of American member
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love ya tooo.....and sooooooooo welcome...xxoo Love
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend ,nature is always inspiring and fills one with happiness be it winter or summer, in the tropics , warm and lush things grow quickly and the flowers spread so beautifully. Yhey are a great joy to yhe heart and therefore to the soul. Absolutely great imageries. I like yhis write.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Hi friend ,nature is always inspiring and fills one with happiness be it winter or summer, in the tropics , warm and lush things grow quickly and the flowers spread so beautifully. Yhey are a great joy to yhe heart and therefore to the soul. Absolutely great imageries. I like yhis write.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thank you, danny :)
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
This was very nice to read. I'm really happy that you put up what up what susurrus means. I never heard of that word before. You are really great
at writing poetry and they are always interesting to read.
Kat
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Hi Gypsy,
This was very nice to read. I'm really happy that you put up what up what susurrus means. I never heard of that word before. You are really great
at writing poetry and they are always interesting to read.
Kat
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thank you, my friend,
Peace be with you,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Member of the Haiku Society of America
Comment from Lu Saluna
I love this butterfly, it is amazing!
I really like your haiku too.
Your satori is perfect for the Blushing Phantom. The photo is stunning!
Without the photo and the information, this haiku too elusive.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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I love this butterfly, it is amazing!
I really like your haiku too.
Your satori is perfect for the Blushing Phantom. The photo is stunning!
Without the photo and the information, this haiku too elusive.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thank you, my friend,
Peace be with you,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Member of the Haiku Society of America
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hmmm.... ok
you alright??
We are in teamspeak, Dean, Doug and I
Come join us
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I don't understand your comment. I was tired, that is all.
buddha blessings,
Gypsy
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I have to go in a few minutes, won't be long.
I will let you know when I am home, maybe you can pop into Teamspeak for a few minutes. We can talk.
Comment from Val Crisson
Interesting haiku with a very good satori line, as always see the butterfly wings as stained glass windows. I had to read it twice to really "get" your intention, or at least what I think your intention is which is always the sign of a good haiku. Lovely!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Interesting haiku with a very good satori line, as always see the butterfly wings as stained glass windows. I had to read it twice to really "get" your intention, or at least what I think your intention is which is always the sign of a good haiku. Lovely!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Val, your kind words make me smile.
Comment from krys123
Greetings, Gypsy;
-I am sorry but I don't have any more six dollars in my coffers but this deserves a six.
-The relevancy between the butterfly's window like wings and your statement in your haiku saying windows to the soul are very effective in creating this relevancy between the two. A very clever and witty haiku.
-The satori really brings out the meaningfulness of this haiku and structures an aha moment that summarizes the relativity of the conceptual theme.
-The first two lines are grammatically connected and have an imagery that is very distinctly clear and definitively expressive let alone being very descriptive.
-Thank you for sharing as this is a wonderful haiku.
Alex
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Greetings, Gypsy;
-I am sorry but I don't have any more six dollars in my coffers but this deserves a six.
-The relevancy between the butterfly's window like wings and your statement in your haiku saying windows to the soul are very effective in creating this relevancy between the two. A very clever and witty haiku.
-The satori really brings out the meaningfulness of this haiku and structures an aha moment that summarizes the relativity of the conceptual theme.
-The first two lines are grammatically connected and have an imagery that is very distinctly clear and definitively expressive let alone being very descriptive.
-Thank you for sharing as this is a wonderful haiku.
Alex
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Alex, you are very kind.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a lovely haiku GRB - your lines one and two interconnect perfectly as required and your third line is a lovely satori with good use of metaphor. Good word 'susurrus' used to good advantage here. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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This is a lovely haiku GRB - your lines one and two interconnect perfectly as required and your third line is a lovely satori with good use of metaphor. Good word 'susurrus' used to good advantage here. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Dorothy, you are very kind.
Comment from DR DIP
I'm glad you put the definition of the word Susurrus in your authorscnotes Gypsy I had never heard of this word before and had to google it before I realized you had given the definition.
Nice description in your haiku
dip
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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I'm glad you put the definition of the word Susurrus in your authorscnotes Gypsy I had never heard of this word before and had to google it before I realized you had given the definition.
Nice description in your haiku
dip
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
