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Comment from nordicgirl
This is a roral howl, man. I know some of these people, well kind of. Is this true? It coyld be, I know. I can see you manipulating a scene like this. Great dialogue and for sure realistic people. Hoping for more of this. NG
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This is a roral howl, man. I know some of these people, well kind of. Is this true? It coyld be, I know. I can see you manipulating a scene like this. Great dialogue and for sure realistic people. Hoping for more of this. NG
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
Comment from BOO ghost
Awe, matey. Script! I do like the color it makes an easy read and not complicated to understand who is talking. BOO just popped a pizza in too. Yep, ghosts eat. Got a chuckle out of this: Aka Judy Sutton. Judy is bi-polar, schizophrenic or both, depending upon which shrink you ask. And you are right. They all got a different diagnosis as long as they ca pump medicine in you, like Thorazine, halodal and morphine. They make you fracking zombies, perfect for Halloween. More meds equals more doubloon for the head doctors. Ask Brad Pitt on 12 Monkeys. Mark Henry: Paranoid schizophrenic, all agree. haha, looks like 'One Flew Over the Coo Coo Nest' cast. Wow-zer! Just administer a dose of shock therapy should suffice, Mikey. The purple is sort of relaxing too. Love this color. Damn! BOO's side is hurting from spontaneous laughter. David
I'm David Vernon McMahon, dammit, and I've got rights. You're lucky I came out of it on my own.
Right. Bet he came in on the paddy wagon in shackles, escaped from Whitehurst mental asylum. Jason Varhee's room mate. Up --oh, Rhonda Crunk: An older woman who never stops talking.
You now an awful lot about these cats. There is one cast member that pretends to be a legit author. He has computer rights and loves birds. Lol! he loves writer sites. Character list at top is a smart move. I just glance up if I get lost. Is a new script. Love this word: exasperated. This is epic. Judy
I'm Mary Queen of Spots. Dad said to answer the damn door.
How many Queen's are there? She may be the size of the 'Queen Mary' located at Longbeach. Ca. Guess she can spruce anybody's goose depends on which one she is. The cursive is a good idea. Hey, BOO is enjoying himself, yaw please hush. What the hell? faking a gran mal seizure. Everyone ignores him. ha ha, damn, BOO aint laughed this hard since he threw up his BOO berries. except the pizza man who looks horrified. A safe bet that he never comes back to this nut house. Ha ha. Billy
Are you the pizza man? I'm piddling. I like to piddle on the wood. Dad says I'm a good piddler. Do you know how to piddle? I know one thing, if I was the pizza man I would drop the fracking pizzas and screw the tip and burn rubber to 7--11. A fracking knife and a fruitcake with a knife? This was epic, looking forward to your next episode or scene, act 2, whatever it is. Oh, he did squeal off. ha ha! Boo did not read ahead, crap. Donny
Okay everyone, enjoy the free pizza. I think that guy was a little nuts. He didn't even want to get paid. This is worth a 7 in my opinion. I come up short but BOO will make up things come Star Day. Wow! Think I just puked up my BOO berries, again. BOO!
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Awe, matey. Script! I do like the color it makes an easy read and not complicated to understand who is talking. BOO just popped a pizza in too. Yep, ghosts eat. Got a chuckle out of this: Aka Judy Sutton. Judy is bi-polar, schizophrenic or both, depending upon which shrink you ask. And you are right. They all got a different diagnosis as long as they ca pump medicine in you, like Thorazine, halodal and morphine. They make you fracking zombies, perfect for Halloween. More meds equals more doubloon for the head doctors. Ask Brad Pitt on 12 Monkeys. Mark Henry: Paranoid schizophrenic, all agree. haha, looks like 'One Flew Over the Coo Coo Nest' cast. Wow-zer! Just administer a dose of shock therapy should suffice, Mikey. The purple is sort of relaxing too. Love this color. Damn! BOO's side is hurting from spontaneous laughter. David
I'm David Vernon McMahon, dammit, and I've got rights. You're lucky I came out of it on my own.
Right. Bet he came in on the paddy wagon in shackles, escaped from Whitehurst mental asylum. Jason Varhee's room mate. Up --oh, Rhonda Crunk: An older woman who never stops talking.
You now an awful lot about these cats. There is one cast member that pretends to be a legit author. He has computer rights and loves birds. Lol! he loves writer sites. Character list at top is a smart move. I just glance up if I get lost. Is a new script. Love this word: exasperated. This is epic. Judy
I'm Mary Queen of Spots. Dad said to answer the damn door.
How many Queen's are there? She may be the size of the 'Queen Mary' located at Longbeach. Ca. Guess she can spruce anybody's goose depends on which one she is. The cursive is a good idea. Hey, BOO is enjoying himself, yaw please hush. What the hell? faking a gran mal seizure. Everyone ignores him. ha ha, damn, BOO aint laughed this hard since he threw up his BOO berries. except the pizza man who looks horrified. A safe bet that he never comes back to this nut house. Ha ha. Billy
Are you the pizza man? I'm piddling. I like to piddle on the wood. Dad says I'm a good piddler. Do you know how to piddle? I know one thing, if I was the pizza man I would drop the fracking pizzas and screw the tip and burn rubber to 7--11. A fracking knife and a fruitcake with a knife? This was epic, looking forward to your next episode or scene, act 2, whatever it is. Oh, he did squeal off. ha ha! Boo did not read ahead, crap. Donny
Okay everyone, enjoy the free pizza. I think that guy was a little nuts. He didn't even want to get paid. This is worth a 7 in my opinion. I come up short but BOO will make up things come Star Day. Wow! Think I just puked up my BOO berries, again. BOO!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
Comment from frierajac
This seems fine as a beginning. I would like to read on awhile. Since there is only verbal communication to get the characterization, I am wondering if you will have a narrator following in sc2?
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This seems fine as a beginning. I would like to read on awhile. Since there is only verbal communication to get the characterization, I am wondering if you will have a narrator following in sc2?
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
Comment from Bobbi22
Good character descriptions and well written opening act. Curious as to what's going to happen next.
One suggestion - you have the pizza man setting the pizzas on the table before Judy tells him where the table is - perhaps switch the order.
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Good character descriptions and well written opening act. Curious as to what's going to happen next.
One suggestion - you have the pizza man setting the pizzas on the table before Judy tells him where the table is - perhaps switch the order.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from robyn corum
You know what you just did, right? You just taught everyone here to act like a crazy, maniacal wood-carving idiot when the pizza-delivery guy comes. Perfect. On behalf f all the pizza companies in America, thank you. --sheesh--
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You know what you just did, right? You just taught everyone here to act like a crazy, maniacal wood-carving idiot when the pizza-delivery guy comes. Perfect. On behalf f all the pizza companies in America, thank you. --sheesh--
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Anastajiya
I found this really interesting and the irony at the end made me laugh. All along the characters were portraying these abnormal and almost crazy personalities yet in the end, it is the pizza man that is deemed to be nuts.
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I found this really interesting and the irony at the end made me laugh. All along the characters were portraying these abnormal and almost crazy personalities yet in the end, it is the pizza man that is deemed to be nuts.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
Comment from Alex Biasin
Interesting, if a little hard to follow.
Certainly gives the characters a lot of scope to show their eccentricities but in some ways, perhaps a little too much going on at once.
Still, very well written and plenty of room for the story to develop.
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Interesting, if a little hard to follow.
Certainly gives the characters a lot of scope to show their eccentricities but in some ways, perhaps a little too much going on at once.
Still, very well written and plenty of room for the story to develop.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
