Comment from Bobbi22

Excellent

This is so true. Someone you meet for just a moment may do or say something that profoundly changes you in ways you could not have expected. Is it coincidence or is it fate? Very well written. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

Comment from Doc Holiday

Excellent

I like this one a lot! It's simply stated and very true. I believe that we are all influenced by those lives that we have touched and how they touch us. Sort of like a people karma. Well-written poem in a creative double etheree format.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I believe that too - that nothing is coincidence and all people have an influence on us. Great double etheree poem. I enjoyed it very much.

teresa

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Outstanding poem in this style.
You nailed it.
"Ev'ry soul influences who I am."
And
"We touch the start of time."
Really good and powerful statements.
Michael

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017