No Coincidences
Double Etheree54 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
Nice on the double etheree, i don;t believe in coincidences either,everything happens for a reason. Great job, thanks for the share and have a good day
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Nice on the double etheree, i don;t believe in coincidences either,everything happens for a reason. Great job, thanks for the share and have a good day
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Jeni
I liked reading this double etheree:
"they say that nothing in life happens by coincidence. This is true in normal situations. But I believe there are meaningful coincidences and have experienced them.
Well done.
Mary
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Hi Jeni
I liked reading this double etheree:
"they say that nothing in life happens by coincidence. This is true in normal situations. But I believe there are meaningful coincidences and have experienced them.
Well done.
Mary
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Ella25
It is beautiful, Jeni. I wish I had that extra sixth star, so well deserved. Yes, people come to our lives for a reason, or a season, or a lifetime. Sometimes they just need something from us, and they leave when achieving what they wanted. I read it somewhere that we have three types of friends in our lives...sailors, they never go in the water; snorkelers, they stay on the top and deep divers that go deep in the water. They are the most true friends we can have as they remain with us no matter what. Excellent Double etheree. Superb. With love, Ella
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It is beautiful, Jeni. I wish I had that extra sixth star, so well deserved. Yes, people come to our lives for a reason, or a season, or a lifetime. Sometimes they just need something from us, and they leave when achieving what they wanted. I read it somewhere that we have three types of friends in our lives...sailors, they never go in the water; snorkelers, they stay on the top and deep divers that go deep in the water. They are the most true friends we can have as they remain with us no matter what. Excellent Double etheree. Superb. With love, Ella
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In a right framework, structure and form of double etheree, I liked this work for its clarity of thematic catch, living in spreadsheet of time, no coincidences, as I enjoyed the glossy word visual imagery, the conviction in appreciation.
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In a right framework, structure and form of double etheree, I liked this work for its clarity of thematic catch, living in spreadsheet of time, no coincidences, as I enjoyed the glossy word visual imagery, the conviction in appreciation.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Sister Luna, how are you, sweetie pie?
"Some people that I meet, as I walk the universe ...may remain with me a long time ...or perhaps just a fleeting moment. "
This is so true and I agree with you wholeheartedly. I think it's that human connection that is so important and you expressed it so well. I can meet someone and only spend an hour with him or her and never see him or her again but that hour may impact the rest of my life.
You did an excellent job, as you always do.
By the way, congratulations on reaching the number one poet rank. Yay! You wear the reigning poetic crown well. LoL Good for you! I know not another poetess who deserves it more.
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Hello, Sister Luna, how are you, sweetie pie?
"Some people that I meet, as I walk the universe ...may remain with me a long time ...or perhaps just a fleeting moment. "
This is so true and I agree with you wholeheartedly. I think it's that human connection that is so important and you expressed it so well. I can meet someone and only spend an hour with him or her and never see him or her again but that hour may impact the rest of my life.
You did an excellent job, as you always do.
By the way, congratulations on reaching the number one poet rank. Yay! You wear the reigning poetic crown well. LoL Good for you! I know not another poetess who deserves it more.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
Comment from Mary Wakeford
I love this and it is worthy of a six that I am flat out of Luna, deep in message, and the presentation with diminishing/expanding lines is exquisite. This is a wonderful gratitude poem, and I believe as you do we are all influenced in some way by those who cross our paths.
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I love this and it is worthy of a six that I am flat out of Luna, deep in message, and the presentation with diminishing/expanding lines is exquisite. This is a wonderful gratitude poem, and I believe as you do we are all influenced in some way by those who cross our paths.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A perfect double entheree. I love these types of poems and the last line 'we touch the start of time' is exceptionally thought of and makes the whole piece
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A perfect double entheree. I love these types of poems and the last line 'we touch the start of time' is exceptionally thought of and makes the whole piece
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
Comment from Irish Rain
I wish I had six stars for this, it's beautiful. I don't believe in coincidence. We create our lives, through our thoughts, emotions, vibrations that attract, or repel. I believe that's how God set the world up. That's why the Bible says repeatedly to guard your thoughts, fear not, ect...in other words...be positive! You get what you believe. Just lovely. No concussion I hope? Blessings...
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I wish I had six stars for this, it's beautiful. I don't believe in coincidence. We create our lives, through our thoughts, emotions, vibrations that attract, or repel. I believe that's how God set the world up. That's why the Bible says repeatedly to guard your thoughts, fear not, ect...in other words...be positive! You get what you believe. Just lovely. No concussion I hope? Blessings...
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Luna, Your poem is really lovely. I especially liked the following:
We touch the
start of
time.
(The above just melted my heart ~ very tender.)
Excellent photo choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
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Hello Luna, Your poem is really lovely. I especially liked the following:
We touch the
start of
time.
(The above just melted my heart ~ very tender.)
Excellent photo choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
Comment from nancyrabbrose
This is a lovely etheree. Good illustration, too. I think that we have already met these people on our path in many lifetimes. This is an evocative poem and it is sweet that you dedicate it to your son. God bless you.
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This is a lovely etheree. Good illustration, too. I think that we have already met these people on our path in many lifetimes. This is an evocative poem and it is sweet that you dedicate it to your son. God bless you.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
