No Coincidences
Double Etheree54 total reviews
Comment from Winslow
Dear Luna,
A great shape poem that whirls and winds itself along the path of your life. Sparks do happen, sometimes the meeting is fleeting and other times it remains for your entire life. Well formed and stated.
Warm regards,
Winslow
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Dear Luna,
A great shape poem that whirls and winds itself along the path of your life. Sparks do happen, sometimes the meeting is fleeting and other times it remains for your entire life. Well formed and stated.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Franklin Price
Thanks for this great write. I believe the same as you. Everyone we meet and touch our lives and we theirs. Whether lasting or not determines the extent.
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Thanks for this great write. I believe the same as you. Everyone we meet and touch our lives and we theirs. Whether lasting or not determines the extent.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are
interesting, creative and thought provoking. The reader pondered on the words of
this poem.
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Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are
interesting, creative and thought provoking. The reader pondered on the words of
this poem.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Zue65
I enjoyed reading your double etheree, the flow is smooth and the message conveys nuggets of wisdom to live by. An excellent piece. Good job. God bless. Susan
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I enjoyed reading your double etheree, the flow is smooth and the message conveys nuggets of wisdom to live by. An excellent piece. Good job. God bless. Susan
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from estory
A really nice job with this form. I don't know if this form can be done much better than the way you executed in this poem. Line breaks are perfect, nice dramatic effect with "nothing/ In life happens/ by coincidence' and "I travel through time / And space" and the ending 'We touch the / Start of/ time" perfect ending word. I love the way this form opens and out and then unwinds into longer and longer lines, and then closes back in on itself. nice resigned voice, very philosophical and sublime. great job with this poem estory
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A really nice job with this form. I don't know if this form can be done much better than the way you executed in this poem. Line breaks are perfect, nice dramatic effect with "nothing/ In life happens/ by coincidence' and "I travel through time / And space" and the ending 'We touch the / Start of/ time" perfect ending word. I love the way this form opens and out and then unwinds into longer and longer lines, and then closes back in on itself. nice resigned voice, very philosophical and sublime. great job with this poem estory
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from #Peace
With tags like Luna and Moonchild, I would assume you are already familiar with the symbolic meaning attached to the diamond shape. Therefore, I will simply say that the shape and the wise content encased within, were a perfect compliment to each other and enhanced the poem's power. I've one suggestion, or question, depending on what your response is... Why the capitol on 'Walking' and 'A'? Otherwise, a perfect double etheree.
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With tags like Luna and Moonchild, I would assume you are already familiar with the symbolic meaning attached to the diamond shape. Therefore, I will simply say that the shape and the wise content encased within, were a perfect compliment to each other and enhanced the poem's power. I've one suggestion, or question, depending on what your response is... Why the capitol on 'Walking' and 'A'? Otherwise, a perfect double etheree.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
I'm always intrigued by the Double etheree format. I love how you were able to craft the poetic form and STILL have the poem flow well and have meaning.
It is true - we can have more than one soul mate. We meet many people in our lives that there is a DEEP connection with. My youngest son and I have always said that our souls have been traveling through time together - we feel that deep connection that I rarely see. And then, I have a soul mate connection to my husband AND my daughter - but each connection is totally different.
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem,
~patty~
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I'm always intrigued by the Double etheree format. I love how you were able to craft the poetic form and STILL have the poem flow well and have meaning.
It is true - we can have more than one soul mate. We meet many people in our lives that there is a DEEP connection with. My youngest son and I have always said that our souls have been traveling through time together - we feel that deep connection that I rarely see. And then, I have a soul mate connection to my husband AND my daughter - but each connection is totally different.
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem,
~patty~
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Dawn Munro
Sometimes when I read your poetry I feel such a strong connection to you it's almost concerning; this time, however, it's comforting, because again we are on the same plane - people do shape who we are to some extent I think, and most especially those ones with whom we share that spark. Blessings, sister Luna. Your double etheree is beautiful.
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Sometimes when I read your poetry I feel such a strong connection to you it's almost concerning; this time, however, it's comforting, because again we are on the same plane - people do shape who we are to some extent I think, and most especially those ones with whom we share that spark. Blessings, sister Luna. Your double etheree is beautiful.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from robyn corum
Jeni,
Very nice! Oh, and I forgot to tell you congrats for moving into first place for poetry! I knew you were headed there. *smile* Now, you just have to hold that spot all year! HAHA! But I think you can do it. --wink--
A couple of notes:
1.) (w)alking on my designed path
2.) (a) remembrance.
Thanks!
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Jeni,
Very nice! Oh, and I forgot to tell you congrats for moving into first place for poetry! I knew you were headed there. *smile* Now, you just have to hold that spot all year! HAHA! But I think you can do it. --wink--
A couple of notes:
1.) (w)alking on my designed path
2.) (a) remembrance.
Thanks!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Wardine
I really enjoyed this piece! I thoroughly appreciated the pacing and wording chosen. The author impacted the reader with their choice of language. I will read more from this author!
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I really enjoyed this piece! I thoroughly appreciated the pacing and wording chosen. The author impacted the reader with their choice of language. I will read more from this author!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
