Mountains are for Climbing
conquering our fears15 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
I can relate to this. With things I've tried to overcome, then backed away from. It's much easier if you just take the first step! This is a beautiful poem, great rhyme! Blessings...
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
  |
I can relate to this. With things I've tried to overcome, then backed away from. It's much easier if you just take the first step! This is a beautiful poem, great rhyme! Blessings...
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
-
Thank you for your most encouraging review
Connie
Comment from marinadawn
yes mountains are for climbing and you present it well the emotions of fear and anxiety that you have to address and the courage it takes to move past ones fears and be able to enjoy the expansive view
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
|
yes mountains are for climbing and you present it well the emotions of fear and anxiety that you have to address and the courage it takes to move past ones fears and be able to enjoy the expansive view
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
-
Thank you so much for your review.
Connie
Comment from robyn corum
Connie,
What a delightful poem about overcoming obstacles and the rewards that come your way at the mountain-top! This was such fun! I enjoyed - as usual, with your writing! Thanks!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
|
Connie,
What a delightful poem about overcoming obstacles and the rewards that come your way at the mountain-top! This was such fun! I enjoyed - as usual, with your writing! Thanks!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
-
Thank you, Robyn, for your encouraging and delightful review.
Connie
Comment from Sixty70
Excellent marks for the message. Facing fears head on is often the best way to overcome them! I especially liked the third stanza. The notion that you could feel a call forward despite an ingrained fear demonstrates the ambivalence that we sometimes have to struggle against. I've often felt a pull toward things that fear me.
Nice meter, and an interesting rhyming pattern.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
|
Excellent marks for the message. Facing fears head on is often the best way to overcome them! I especially liked the third stanza. The notion that you could feel a call forward despite an ingrained fear demonstrates the ambivalence that we sometimes have to struggle against. I've often felt a pull toward things that fear me.
Nice meter, and an interesting rhyming pattern.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
-
Thank you so much for your review.
Connie
Comment from marybell1
I loved your poem of making that extra effort. It can be so rewarding, and encourages you to see just how far you can go. (within reason).
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
|
I loved your poem of making that extra effort. It can be so rewarding, and encourages you to see just how far you can go. (within reason).
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
-
Thanks so much, Marybell, for your thoughtful review.
Connie
-
Keep writing.
Cheers.
Marybell1.
