From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Love's Sweet Light"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, i cannot help but give you the six star rating. Your writing deserves it, the flow and the simplicity and above all the message of love is just great.
I love it.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Hi friend, i cannot help but give you the six star rating. Your writing deserves it, the flow and the simplicity and above all the message of love is just great.
I love it.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
thanks so much Danny, for your wonderful review. I' It is a real honor, much appreciated...and glad to meet you
HIS GRAYNESS....
Comment from fimarie78
Beautiful. Our Father offers us immeasurable love. There were so many lovely phrases. illuminates was a good word choice and I loved scurries. Singing promises of everlasting bond - a fabulous line. I would have just liked a few line spaces here and there, to let your porm breath. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Beautiful. Our Father offers us immeasurable love. There were so many lovely phrases. illuminates was a good word choice and I loved scurries. Singing promises of everlasting bond - a fabulous line. I would have just liked a few line spaces here and there, to let your porm breath. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much fimarie, for this very kind review! Nice to meet you and look forward to reading your works as well
Thanks so much fimarie, it is nice to meet you and I appreciate your very king review. HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your beautiful artwork and background color completed the piece well.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your beautiful artwork and background color completed the piece well.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much winnona, for your very kind review....it's greatly appreciated HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Teri7
This is a very pretty and well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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This is a very pretty and well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
Thank you so much Terri, for your very kind and uplifting review. It is greatly appreciated! His Grayness: Vance
