Comment from winnona

Excellent

Beautiful artwork that completed your well-written contest entry. I think you did well completing the challenge of the contest. in the few words allowed you told a very compelling story. Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

A very intriguing little piece. Good solid tales for this 100 word contest. Dialogue well executed. Good job.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine story for just one hundred words.
Excellent dialogue establishing the many characters
and the pivot at the very end.
Of course, she left the door open,
as well as the story.
Excellent art work to match.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Great review -thanks for reading zanya