Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest very well. In just a few words you managed to write a complete story of young love. well done.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017

Thanks.

Comment from fimarie78

Excellent

You tackle this topic well in 100 words. I liked the last line. I just felt that manliness wasn't a contemporary enough description in the context of your piece, with two American teens. best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks for your read and the comments. Actual setting was the 1950's should have made that clear.

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Well that's one way to explain it.
This is a unique story and told quickly.
Meets the contest requirements nicely.
Good job!
Michael

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments.