Kindness
towards those in need.4 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Good luck in the contest, Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Good luck in the contest, Well done.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
Yes an interesting reflection here in this Tetracyts Contest on our very raison d'etre, as it were and how we should relate to our fellow 'travellers'- we soon often forget that we are but tenants of this beautiful earth
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Yes an interesting reflection here in this Tetracyts Contest on our very raison d'etre, as it were and how we should relate to our fellow 'travellers'- we soon often forget that we are but tenants of this beautiful earth
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your insightful review!
Comment from rama devi
Second review
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First review (FOUR stars)
Excellent aphoristic observation and inspired message. Lovely presentation too. True to form but there is one issue in the repeating word ABOUT...doesn't work well to repeat it. Sounds awkward. Maybe it was a mistake? I suggest replacing the second one with a descriptive of the creations. Example:
To
be kind
reflects how
we feel about
God's wondrous creations - including Man
Love the message.
Happy to upgrade if you replace that second about!
Good luck
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Second review
:-)))
First review (FOUR stars)
Excellent aphoristic observation and inspired message. Lovely presentation too. True to form but there is one issue in the repeating word ABOUT...doesn't work well to repeat it. Sounds awkward. Maybe it was a mistake? I suggest replacing the second one with a descriptive of the creations. Example:
To
be kind
reflects how
we feel about
God's wondrous creations - including Man
Love the message.
Happy to upgrade if you replace that second about!
Good luck
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your insights and helpful suggestion. Must admit I posted this on the spur of the moment
and operated more on feeling than thought. Appreciate your honesty. Will revise it.
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Great--happy to re-review. Thanks for your gracious response. Warmly, rd
Comment from Poetic Friend
With minimal words, you conveyed an universe message. How true are your statements! I strongly believe we are placed here on earth to love and care for each other -- man and animals. If only each person would just to apply God's principles, this world would be bearable.
Your artwork complements your message so well.
Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed Sunday.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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With minimal words, you conveyed an universe message. How true are your statements! I strongly believe we are placed here on earth to love and care for each other -- man and animals. If only each person would just to apply God's principles, this world would be bearable.
Your artwork complements your message so well.
Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed Sunday.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much!
