Comment from winnona

Excellent

Beautiful artwork that completed your poem well. A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Thanks for the review, cheers, j

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Nicely composed for the contest. It is good to have special days of this kind to reaffirm our love. I would suggest a capital letter for Day and wondered why you had put the comma in your last line.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks for the review and helpful advice. I put the comma there for a pause, but took your advice and took it out. I love to see couples that do simple, loving acts every day just to confirm their love and not just a couple times a year. If my husband did that I would be very suspicious ha ha. Cheers, j

Comment from JACK2

Excellent

Very nicely worded and a powerful delivery just in time to share with every body for valentines day. Your message resonates with the reader . coop

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks for the review Jack. It is nice to keep the love and sentiments going all year, not just Feb. 14. Cheers j

reply by JACK2 on 05-Feb-2017

Very true my friend.coop

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

You've done a good job with this piece. fits the syllable count. My mind kept wanting to write I keep it in a jar on the sideboard! for the last line...

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Ha ha, I think some men figurtively do that, then take it down a couple times a year and dust it off. I love couples that show their love in simple, tender ways all year round. Thanks for the amusing review, cheers, j