Comment from WhileatWork

Excellent

I like how you make the poem come alive with the image and sounds. Crows really do look very ominous always, and where I live we have hundreds of ravens, they too are scary.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017

They can be scary, Ed, no doubt.
Thanks for the review.
~Dean

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Great artwork and sound effects. Love the way they start a few seconds after I'm starting to read, gets me every time. Oh, I love the words to, especially the last line - murder most fowl - still smiling.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017

Haha, thanks for checking it out, Pearl.
Much obliged.
~Dean

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A very well done fowl haiku, my friend. I love I haiku--do you? How very creative. One of my reviewers said he got rid of his haiku with some medicine. Have a great Sunday~Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks, Debbie.
I appreciate the read and review.
You do the same.
~Dean

Comment from Rasmine

Exceptional

Awesome, as usual, Dean! The crow sounds just add to our enjoyment. I need to watch the video before I save this. I was still listening to the crow sounds as I started to write the review.
Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Missed this one Dean - it is a brilliant haiku. Line one - good alliteration and appropriate for this kind of bird. Line 2 interconnects with line one and is a good example of a well known saying. Line three - brilliant satori with excellent use of homophone with the word 'fowl'. Well done. Dorothy

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks for the read & review, Dorothy.
Much obliged.
~Dean :}

Comment from pharp

Exceptional

Dean,

Outstanding job in the penning of this haiku, you always deliver. I recall one time, there were a lot of crows gathering in the trees it was so many it reminded me of the Hitchcock movie the "Birds." I love the satori line, exceptional job my friend and thanks for sharing. Blessings......Portia

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

Comment from barkingdog

Exceptional

'Murder most fowl' was what got the six.
Well the alliteration in the first line didn't hurt. haha
I had several sixes left on a Saturday, being that I'm not on site as much as I once was and knew you'd produce a deserving haiku.
So, here ya go.
Have a great weekend.

:) e

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Exceptional

Dean,
You did an awesome job with your haiku. Perfect in style. I love the alliteration & the play n words in the satori.

I have crows that dare me to walk by to my car. But I feed them & I live in a bird sanctuary town/county.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Greetings, Dean;
-by the way I want to tell you I like your T-shirt that you sent by the email. It is quickly coming but I wouldn't wear it in the crowd.
-I like your haiku it's very impressively written and the picture works very well with your poem so one might call it a Haiga.
-Two definitely dramatic and dramatic connected lines and a great satori which definitely offers that spontaneity of excitement and summarizes the relativity of the conceptual theme of the haiku.
-The sound really adds to your haiku.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one;

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

Comment from BOO ghost

Exceptional

Pesky crows. They poop on me scare crow and ransack my garden. Do I ever get a break from these birds? OP, oh, I am having a back flash to that movie called 'The Birds." An evil crow? Hum,, should had figured that synopsis, mate. ha ha, nice action with the 3 consistence C words, pilgrim. Nice addition to your book. Time to do what ghosts do best... disappear. BOO!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017