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Somewhere, Down The Road

A fight with cancer

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written but very sad poem you have penned. I am sorry about your wife, but happy you are still here with us writing! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
    I appreciate your support.I feel my spirits rising
Comment from lyenochka
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Amen! No matter what happens we know our spirit will be cancer-free in Him Who conquered sin and death for us. It is a great way to address cancer, in a poem and show you have already won.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
    I appreciate your support and happy about your faith-thank you
Comment from Poetic Friend
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My sincerest condolence on your loss. I can relate to your cancer dilemma. I lost both my father and brother to lung cancer. You described the demonic disease so accurately in your poem.

Thank God, you are still here. At least, someone is cancer-free after a horrible encounter.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
    Thank you friend for looking me over.Mighty nice of you and I really appreciate you
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Spirit for living is the most wanted quality for living or survival, perchance spirit is ageless, genderless or something that is never vulnerable to any disaster in living, so well conveyed the theme and the message is clear as the story is clearly expressed in unrestricted rhymes; I enjoyed the value exalted and the artistic presentation of a sensible tale; the flow of thoughts is natural like the visual imagery; it was a pleasant read.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
    Thank you for your thorough and most encouraging comment.I appreciate you
Comment from Bobbi22
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Cancer is such an ugly thing that destroys so much. Sorry that your wife lost her battle. Glad that you remain cancer free after so long and also that you hape kept your spirit cancer free. Very well written. thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

Comment from Bucketlist
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JAYBIRD 1, I THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR PAIN AND TRIUMPHS. I DONT THINK ANYONE UNERSTANDS WHY SOME IF US ARE RIPPED APART BY CANCER.
HOWEVER, I LOVE YOUR SENTIMENTAL PENNING.


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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
    Guess I was a lucky one of which I am very happy and thankful.Thankyou for many comments
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reply by Bucketlist on 07-Feb-2017
    Yes, a second chance at life, but it's tough to lose your mate first.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A loved this short poem with great rhyming words and flow, the fight mankind has with cancer is certainly a battle many have failed to win, your poem is a winner though and six stars is the only score I can give, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
    A greatly appreciated comment.Thank you for that 6 star rating