For a Dream
Kyrielle Sonnet71 total reviews
Comment from dmt1967
I like the thought of bungled moonbeams for a dream. I can imagine moon rays penetrating the brain and giving us our dreams. The picture is very colourful as well. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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I like the thought of bungled moonbeams for a dream. I can imagine moon rays penetrating the brain and giving us our dreams. The picture is very colourful as well. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, I appreciate it.
Comment from briannaellison
Nice job - your poem is very descriptive. I feel like I can touch the moonbeams and see the fairies you describe! I really liked your piece - keep it up!
-Brim
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Nice job - your poem is very descriptive. I feel like I can touch the moonbeams and see the fairies you describe! I really liked your piece - keep it up!
-Brim
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Dear Brim,
I appreciate the kind six-star review you have given to my poem. I'm honored and grateful. Thank you for your warm words of review and support of my poetry efforts.
Again, thank you for the lovely six-star review.]
Best,
jeni
Comment from Bobby Jo
Nice rhyme and rhythem. It feels good to read and it makes you sit back for a relaxing, hot summer night. I felt the my mood relax and my worries disappear. This is good.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Nice rhyme and rhythem. It feels good to read and it makes you sit back for a relaxing, hot summer night. I felt the my mood relax and my worries disappear. This is good.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Dear Bobby Jo, I appreciate your warm words of review and support of my poetry efforts. Thanks!
Comment from MsPetra
You have done it again. I love this poem. You did a great job with it.
You've held true to form. Your rhyme and meter are spot on.
Also, I liked what you had to say to this.
Good job all around.
I am looking forward to your next offering.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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You have done it again. I love this poem. You did a great job with it.
You've held true to form. Your rhyme and meter are spot on.
Also, I liked what you had to say to this.
Good job all around.
I am looking forward to your next offering.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Dear MsPetra, I appreciate truly your very kind words of review and support of my poetry efforts. Thanks!
Comment from Bill Schott
First, its a fascinating format. Then, your poem, For a Dream, flows so well with metered pacing and on time rhyme. Great delivery with this theme.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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First, its a fascinating format. Then, your poem, For a Dream, flows so well with metered pacing and on time rhyme. Great delivery with this theme.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Dear Bill, I'm glad that you liked the format and the poem. Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Best,
jeni
Comment from rspoet
This is done quite well to the kyrielle sonnet form
with excellent exact and near rhymes, and meter
The repeating lines feel a bit strange in a sonnet
but that is the way of the French form
The assonance works to advantage in the poem, as well
Interesting art work to match
Nicely done
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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This is done quite well to the kyrielle sonnet form
with excellent exact and near rhymes, and meter
The repeating lines feel a bit strange in a sonnet
but that is the way of the French form
The assonance works to advantage in the poem, as well
Interesting art work to match
Nicely done
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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dear rspoet
I'm glad that you found this p oem pleasing. Your warm words of review are very kind and much appreciated. Thanks for supporting my poetry efforts today.
Best,
jeni
Comment from LIJ Red
From your description in the notes, this looks to me like a Kyrielle Sonnet. I guess
we'll soon see lights of settlements on the moon. Kind of sad. Excellent post.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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From your description in the notes, this looks to me like a Kyrielle Sonnet. I guess
we'll soon see lights of settlements on the moon. Kind of sad. Excellent post.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Yes, it is a Kyrielle sonnet. Yes, climate change is quickly making all sorts of previously unimaginable things a bitter reality. Thanks for your support.
Best,
jeni
Comment from Susan Chetcuti
Your poem For A Dream is a lovely piece. Your focus is obviously about the moon and how it plays a part through the night. I liked the line, sweet fairies grace these rays. A lovely read.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Your poem For A Dream is a lovely piece. Your focus is obviously about the moon and how it plays a part through the night. I liked the line, sweet fairies grace these rays. A lovely read.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Dear Susan, I appreciate your warm words of review and your telling me a line that you liked. I'm happy you enjoyed.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, i like the softness in your writing. It has a great flow and of course I must forget that softness relates to moonbeams and moon beams to dreams. And this means that there is so great a coherence, a certain tying of all the knots bringing the ideas together, well done.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Hi friend, i like the softness in your writing. It has a great flow and of course I must forget that softness relates to moonbeams and moon beams to dreams. And this means that there is so great a coherence, a certain tying of all the knots bringing the ideas together, well done.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Hi there, Danny, good to see you. I thank you for your kind words of review and support today.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Wouldn't it be amazing to go sailing off into the night sky to explore what is really out there?
Sounds like you are a child of the night in this poem.
Well written, with illusions easy to follow.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Wouldn't it be amazing to go sailing off into the night sky to explore what is really out there?
Sounds like you are a child of the night in this poem.
Well written, with illusions easy to follow.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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I AM a child of the night, and a child of the moon as well. Have been all my life. I'm happy you enjoyed this.
