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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Ocean of Dreams"Love poems
23 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful description of the journey of two loving souls who experienced much together. I like how it starts with the challenges (dueling fears) and ends with the two having survived the journey and looking back and "reminiscing."
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Beautiful description of the journey of two loving souls who experienced much together. I like how it starts with the challenges (dueling fears) and ends with the two having survived the journey and looking back and "reminiscing."
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Yes!! Thank you for reading and the awesome review!!! I do appreciate it!!! hugs
Comment from Maureen Sky
So nice is this poem! I like it very much. It reads so nicely and you can truly get a visual of lovers at sea embracing each other while letting the ocean and the moon dominate their next move. Nicely done.
M. Sky
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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So nice is this poem! I like it very much. It reads so nicely and you can truly get a visual of lovers at sea embracing each other while letting the ocean and the moon dominate their next move. Nicely done.
M. Sky
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Hi Maureen!!! Thank you so very much for this lovely review!!! Hugs
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding poetry, Susan. I especially liked this stanza:
"Our magical craft,
adrift in love's draft,
ocean secrets casting their spell ...
In fantasies' realm,
pure pleasure must whelm,
where unhindered, sweet desires dwell."
Blessings, my friend. Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Outstanding poetry, Susan. I especially liked this stanza:
"Our magical craft,
adrift in love's draft,
ocean secrets casting their spell ...
In fantasies' realm,
pure pleasure must whelm,
where unhindered, sweet desires dwell."
Blessings, my friend. Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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HI BOB!!! thank you so much for reading and the review! I really appreciate it!! and.... just so you know...I am SOOOOOOO loving that story of yours!! ( even that mole on Connie's face lol)..I am so hooked!!!! hugs
Comment from Quantum Traveler
A Beautiful Love Poem Eloquently Penned as only a Romantically Free Spirited Dreamer could Compose.
The Shimmering Vibrant Image Equates so well to the Essence of Merriment and Passion through Kaleidoscope Eyes on a Magical Craft Adrift in Love's Draft.
Outstanding Image that Drifts well with Waves of Imagination.
Excellent Susan...You are a Beautiful Gift of Spirit...Quantum Traveler...Phil.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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A Beautiful Love Poem Eloquently Penned as only a Romantically Free Spirited Dreamer could Compose.
The Shimmering Vibrant Image Equates so well to the Essence of Merriment and Passion through Kaleidoscope Eyes on a Magical Craft Adrift in Love's Draft.
Outstanding Image that Drifts well with Waves of Imagination.
Excellent Susan...You are a Beautiful Gift of Spirit...Quantum Traveler...Phil.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Phil...this review...omgoodness. Smiling. ( sent pm)
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Smiles...I Like Smiles...Q.T...Phil.
Comment from Irish Rain
What a beautiful line...'kaleidoscope eyes'....all the colors in the lovely water are reflected in those lovely eyes, in my mind. This is just over-all wondrous!! Blessings..
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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What a beautiful line...'kaleidoscope eyes'....all the colors in the lovely water are reflected in those lovely eyes, in my mind. This is just over-all wondrous!! Blessings..
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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:-) thank you for reading and for the awesome review!!! I so do appreciate YOU!
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely romantic poem filled with beautiful imagery to capture the heart of the reader.
Very nice rhyme and alliteration. Very nicely done.
blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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A lovely romantic poem filled with beautiful imagery to capture the heart of the reader.
Very nice rhyme and alliteration. Very nicely done.
blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Hi Janet! Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. hugs
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is well written and full of romantic feelings through the poem using very good strong words I enjoyed my friend it is beautiful regards Jill
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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This is well written and full of romantic feelings through the poem using very good strong words I enjoyed my friend it is beautiful regards Jill
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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HI JILL!! Thank you for reading and for this wonderful review!! I so appreciate you. hugs
Comment from Bobbi22
I like how the momentum of the romance builds through each stanza until the last when the two lovers relax. Very well written love poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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I like how the momentum of the romance builds through each stanza until the last when the two lovers relax. Very well written love poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Hi There! Thanks for reading!...Glad you enjoyed. :-)))
Comment from Hitcher
I enjoyed reading your warm sensual romantic offering friend, the visuals were delightful and caused a smile in the minds eye of this reader, very nicely done!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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I enjoyed reading your warm sensual romantic offering friend, the visuals were delightful and caused a smile in the minds eye of this reader, very nicely done!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Sweet review!!! Thank you so very much!!! hugs
Comment from DR DIP
Wow! so many beautiful verses Susan. Everyone on FanStory has different styles some metaphorical some simple yet heartfelt some flowery and descriptive.
this my friend falls in Dip's favorite " category
I so love the way you write romance poems My favorite verse of favorite verses in this one:
Our magical craft,
adrift in love's draft,
ocean secrets casting their spell ...
In fantasies' realm,
pure pleasure must whelm,
where unhindered, sweet desires dwell.
Do you know how good you are? Everyone else does! me especially and I say this with sincerity and integrity If i had a 6 left You would have it in spades. You have a beautiful way with words that shines through in every write. Well done as always
x dip
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Wow! so many beautiful verses Susan. Everyone on FanStory has different styles some metaphorical some simple yet heartfelt some flowery and descriptive.
this my friend falls in Dip's favorite " category
I so love the way you write romance poems My favorite verse of favorite verses in this one:
Our magical craft,
adrift in love's draft,
ocean secrets casting their spell ...
In fantasies' realm,
pure pleasure must whelm,
where unhindered, sweet desires dwell.
Do you know how good you are? Everyone else does! me especially and I say this with sincerity and integrity If i had a 6 left You would have it in spades. You have a beautiful way with words that shines through in every write. Well done as always
x dip
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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OH Dipster! you always make my day. hugs
