Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "haiku (tree frog)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
23 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debbie,
Your last line was quite creative, and from the pic it sure does look like he's blowing bubbles. Nice sharp imagery, strong haiku.
Thanks for sharing.
m
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Dear Debbie,
Your last line was quite creative, and from the pic it sure does look like he's blowing bubbles. Nice sharp imagery, strong haiku.
Thanks for sharing.
m
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Thank you. Take care, my friend. You are in my prayers~Debbie
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOve it. Most are like 5-7-5 but this is a true haiku in my books and I am not a real friend with haiku but some , like this one, really stands our. Bubble gum ... so true
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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LOve it. Most are like 5-7-5 but this is a true haiku in my books and I am not a real friend with haiku but some , like this one, really stands our. Bubble gum ... so true
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed~Debbie
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
You have done well using 14 syllable the last line made me smile very original well done my friend I enjoyed a good addition t6o the book regards Jill
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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You have done well using 14 syllable the last line made me smile very original well done my friend I enjoyed a good addition t6o the book regards Jill
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed~Debbie
Comment from Dawn Munro
Debbie, this is so clever! I'm not sure why all the chatter above (in the notes) but I am presuming it has something to do with the new 'class' - or maybe it's because it's a multi-author book. In any event, I think your haiku is great! Basho would have loved it, I'm sure.
(But let's get our noses a little higher, shall we? LOL. Thanks, but no thanks, as much as I love the form.)
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Debbie, this is so clever! I'm not sure why all the chatter above (in the notes) but I am presuming it has something to do with the new 'class' - or maybe it's because it's a multi-author book. In any event, I think your haiku is great! Basho would have loved it, I'm sure.
(But let's get our noses a little higher, shall we? LOL. Thanks, but no thanks, as much as I love the form.)
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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I have no idea where that came from, but I removed it. Thank you for mentioning it, my friend. Isn't he a cutie?~Debbie
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LOL. Yep, if a frog can be cute. Send me a prince instead, okay? LOL.
Comment from JW
I am looking forward to warm weather, flowers, and tree frogs the Spring.
Our weather recently has been like a roller-coaster. Warm - in the low 60's for a day or two, then back into the upper 30's or low 40's for a while.
Perfect weather to make one catch a cold or flu.
Thanks for sharing this, Debbie. JW
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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I am looking forward to warm weather, flowers, and tree frogs the Spring.
Our weather recently has been like a roller-coaster. Warm - in the low 60's for a day or two, then back into the upper 30's or low 40's for a while.
Perfect weather to make one catch a cold or flu.
Thanks for sharing this, Debbie. JW
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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It's not been a bad winter here and I hope that continues and we have an early spring. Thank you, my friend. I bet our furry friends will like the warmer weather too. Katie Jo has gone to the door the past few days wanting out. It's supposed to be in the forties today so I might put her out for a bit--if she ever wakes up~Debbie
Comment from patcelaw
Debbie, this is a charmingly cute haiku about the lowly tree frog. You brought a smile to my face with this one. Blessings for a great day. I had missed seeing you for a few days. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Debbie, this is a charmingly cute haiku about the lowly tree frog. You brought a smile to my face with this one. Blessings for a great day. I had missed seeing you for a few days. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed this one~Debbie
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Debbie,
This haiku is so much fun. I absolutely loved your satori line... bubble gum is always something to smile about :) It paints the perfect picture of the tree frog all on its own.
Great job!
Kim
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Hi Debbie,
This haiku is so much fun. I absolutely loved your satori line... bubble gum is always something to smile about :) It paints the perfect picture of the tree frog all on its own.
Great job!
Kim
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you. I saw the picture and it looked like he had swallowed some. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Marvellous Haiku art work on Nature word canvas; visual imagery plenty, so appropriately and colourfully knitted, sense of humour and playful stand well retained, more so, composed in free flow of thoughts; I enjoyed the artistic visual-studded light read.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Marvellous Haiku art work on Nature word canvas; visual imagery plenty, so appropriately and colourfully knitted, sense of humour and playful stand well retained, more so, composed in free flow of thoughts; I enjoyed the artistic visual-studded light read.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the thoughtful review, my friend~Debbie
Comment from keimosobie
Looks like he ate some. I luv the poem and the picture and the funny last line. Well done. I think it should get the exceptional rating. I've rated a few of these and I like this one the best. good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Looks like he ate some. I luv the poem and the picture and the funny last line. Well done. I think it should get the exceptional rating. I've rated a few of these and I like this one the best. good luck.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you. I truly appreciate your exceptional rating and stars, my friend~Debbie
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
Just looking at the frog air pocket made me laugh so early in the morning thank you for that.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match
Just looking at the frog air pocket made me laugh so early in the morning thank you for that.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it, my friend~Debbie
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You're very welcome, take care.
Cookie
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You're very welcome, take care.
Cookie
