Comment from Leineco

Excellent

LOL - no bubble gum. . .!!

That's cute :-) I sure hope he doesn't pop it though! There's no going
back from that one! ;-)

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017

Yep, one pop is all they are allowed. Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

this is an interesting haiku. good play on words for the bubble gum and the frog getting ready to let out a mighty croak. nicely done.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

LOLOL. What a great metaphor. THat billowing pouch does indeed like a bubble blown out of a wad of gum. (I used to love to do that back when I had all my teeth.)

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017

I still have all my teeth--not even a cavity yet. This rest of me hasn't fared so well however. Thank you, my friend~Debbie

reply by Spitfire on 04-Feb-2017

Wow! That's something to brag about.

Comment from Sherman541

Exceptional

I do not know what to say - great little pun and play on the frog - wonderful little poem - I love the picture you found to go with it. Great Job - Sarah

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017

Thank you again, my friend~Debbie

reply by Sherman541 on 04-Feb-2017

you are welcome

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Debbie, what a cute haiku for the haiku club challenge. I like the
part about he doesn't need any bubble gum. He makes his own
bubble for all to see. A great picture to go with it.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Debbie,
My initial reaction... a smile of joy in the thought of... ' needs no bubble gum'.

A clever- well penned and presented Haiku my dear friend... enjoyed the read... and yes, the reaction it created!

With our thoughts we create,
harmonic tunes.
James vx's.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017

Thank you so very much, dear James. I'm glad it made you smile, my friend. Have a wonderful night with your lovely wife~Debbie xx

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Debbie. this is a great entry for the challenge. I think someonem else did this tree frog, but I am notm sure. At any rate the haiku was not the same at all. Do you have any idea what that bubble is for? Just curious. Good job. Blessings, Bob

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017

I think most were about frogs of one type or another. Hop-hop-have a hoppy week, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Wow! Isn't that interesting! I just love a poem I can learn something from. A lovely haiku, with a humorous twist! Loved this, blessings..

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Debbie,

How are you doing? It was good to hear you at the club meeting.

Your haiku is perfect. Many of us wrote about frogs and we are learning as we go. It's cool.

Thank you,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend. There is always more to learn, for sure~Debbie

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

"Needs no bubble gum" !!!! how clever!!!....this is a wonderful little haiku!!
I certainly enjoyed reading!! great pic too!!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017

Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed~Debbie