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A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets

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Comment from Leineco
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Aha! You're in chapter 10039! (Just thought to check deeper in)
(might want to change it to 8 if you have a minute :-)

Anyway. . .nicely descriptive. . .she could never serve in Trump's
White House though. . .he insists on those lady-like fills, like dresses
and heels. . .she's much to rugged and ready to take care of herself :-)


 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
    That's true ..no Lizards allowed there !!!!great review zanya
Comment from Selina Stambi
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Not a huge fan of reptiles, but you manage to make them elegant in the third 'aha' line!

Lizard haute couture ...

Well done (ugh!)

Sonali

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
    Great review zanya
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a delightful haiku about one of the creatures in nature. I'd rather not have these little guys around me as the send chills up my spine. Patricia

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
    Me too - I get chills down my spine ! thanks for the review zanya