Lamentations of a Lost Laddy
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Comment from MissMerri
Darren, this true story has touched me profoundly. I am so moved by the story, but also by the beautiful way in which you tell it. Your writing amazes me. I could find no fault with any of it. Tears flowed as I read of your interaction with Angel, and the way God used you to bless and help her. Keep writing your wonderful stories. You must have at least a million. I always enjoy reading what you've written.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Darren, this true story has touched me profoundly. I am so moved by the story, but also by the beautiful way in which you tell it. Your writing amazes me. I could find no fault with any of it. Tears flowed as I read of your interaction with Angel, and the way God used you to bless and help her. Keep writing your wonderful stories. You must have at least a million. I always enjoy reading what you've written.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for yur kind words, tears of joy, and for fellowshipping with me over this powerful message. He helped me right (~!~)
Thanks,
Darren ~
Comment from Wardine
I really enjoyed this piece! I thoroughly appreciated the pacing and wording chosen. The author impacted the reader with their choice of language. I will read more from this author!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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I really enjoyed this piece! I thoroughly appreciated the pacing and wording chosen. The author impacted the reader with their choice of language. I will read more from this author!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Thank-you so much, Wardine. If you liked this, might I suggest a couple more with this theme that are in my portfolio:
The Beacon, a spiritual song, A New Star, His Star, Spiritual Flight, and the third chapter of my Biography, Lamentations of a Lost Laddy, titled Mr. Darren and Recovery.,
Thanks for your kind words, interest, fellowship, and support.
Blessings,
Brother Badger ~
Comment from DonandVicki
I can relate to your story as I have been witness to the Holy Spirit and the power of prayer. A very interesting and imaginative story that I have enjoyed.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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I can relate to your story as I have been witness to the Holy Spirit and the power of prayer. A very interesting and imaginative story that I have enjoyed.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Ty very much for your kind words and warm review.
Blessings,
Brother Darren
Comment from GWinterwin
Your story is a real blessing. You no doubt are a spirit filled human that shows love in the way God wants us to. God bless you for your faithfulness to God, and your fellow man. Your humility glorifies God, and your caring is what makes him smile. God bless you always as the holy spirit works through you.
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Your story is a real blessing. You no doubt are a spirit filled human that shows love in the way God wants us to. God bless you for your faithfulness to God, and your fellow man. Your humility glorifies God, and your caring is what makes him smile. God bless you always as the holy spirit works through you.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Ty so much for your kind words, fellowship, and warm review.
Blessings,
Brother Darren
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Badger: I like your story. Many times, I have been called to chat with
someone. I say what I hear from God, not me, only God. So, hopefully,
I'm helping them, too. I like your story. She was willed to talk to the lady
of prayers. You have a great witness to the world. We should all be spirit
led, listen and pray. God bless. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Badger: I like your story. Many times, I have been called to chat with
someone. I say what I hear from God, not me, only God. So, hopefully,
I'm helping them, too. I like your story. She was willed to talk to the lady
of prayers. You have a great witness to the world. We should all be spirit
led, listen and pray. God bless. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Ty so much for your kind words, fellowship ",and continued support.
Blessings,
Brother Darren
Comment from suep
What a wonderful experience! I enjoyed reading it. You held my interest and had great descriptions. I could visualize the scene as you drove your bike past the quacking duck pond.
You had nice alliteration, especially with 'connects, convicts, and communicates with us constantly'. I love that you recognized and followed that pull of the Holy Spirit nudging you and how you explained to her that is was the Holy Spirit working through you and thanks should be directed above.
I only spotted two spelling errors - in the title, I think you may mean Lady, with one d. Also, the sentence that begins 'But I decided to keep gong toward home' - you just need an 'i' to change 'gong' to 'going'.
You expressed gratitude for help you've received from others and it certainly seems God is using you to help others. A great testimony. Excellent work! Sue P. :)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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What a wonderful experience! I enjoyed reading it. You held my interest and had great descriptions. I could visualize the scene as you drove your bike past the quacking duck pond.
You had nice alliteration, especially with 'connects, convicts, and communicates with us constantly'. I love that you recognized and followed that pull of the Holy Spirit nudging you and how you explained to her that is was the Holy Spirit working through you and thanks should be directed above.
I only spotted two spelling errors - in the title, I think you may mean Lady, with one d. Also, the sentence that begins 'But I decided to keep gong toward home' - you just need an 'i' to change 'gong' to 'going'.
You expressed gratitude for help you've received from others and it certainly seems God is using you to help others. A great testimony. Excellent work! Sue P. :)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Thanks for your kind words and help with typos. I have edited, and since the title Lamentations of a List Laddy, Laddy being British slang for a boy. Thanks again,
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
obsessive compulsive disorder, bipolar type I, amongst other things, we have that in common. This is a brilliant and honest write, not many would be so bold but you have done an exceptional job of explaining what the conditions can cause, the hell they can make life for you and your loved ones, but boy you can write, I think many great writer suffer from these and various other mental conditions, it makes you all the stronger and will and does add credence and depth to your writing. very well done love meia :)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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obsessive compulsive disorder, bipolar type I, amongst other things, we have that in common. This is a brilliant and honest write, not many would be so bold but you have done an exceptional job of explaining what the conditions can cause, the hell they can make life for you and your loved ones, but boy you can write, I think many great writer suffer from these and various other mental conditions, it makes you all the stronger and will and does add credence and depth to your writing. very well done love meia :)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Ty so much for your kind words as and cont. support. Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Heidi M
What an interesting story that you got to participate in. Had you not been sensitive to the Spirit's leading, you would have missed it altogether.
'variable spont(a)neity'
You have some very good word choices. The physical issues you deal with are challenging, so I think you did an especially good job in spite of them writing your story so that it flowed well. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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What an interesting story that you got to participate in. Had you not been sensitive to the Spirit's leading, you would have missed it altogether.
'variable spont(a)neity'
You have some very good word choices. The physical issues you deal with are challenging, so I think you did an especially good job in spite of them writing your story so that it flowed well. Nicely done!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words, fellowship, and continued support.
Blessings
Brother Badger
Comment from Smokes Widow
First of all, I love the uplifting style of writing. Despite the list of disabilities the writer deals with, there was no whining. Only explanation and inspiration. I am amply familiar with that "spiritual pull" and the few times I've ignored it, I've regretted it. Something wonderful always comes of it. I was glad to share in their prayers and joy, the hope, and faith offered. I found the bits of information about the area, the reasons, and the programs interesting enough to prompt outside exploration of same. Well done. Thank you!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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First of all, I love the uplifting style of writing. Despite the list of disabilities the writer deals with, there was no whining. Only explanation and inspiration. I am amply familiar with that "spiritual pull" and the few times I've ignored it, I've regretted it. Something wonderful always comes of it. I was glad to share in their prayers and joy, the hope, and faith offered. I found the bits of information about the area, the reasons, and the programs interesting enough to prompt outside exploration of same. Well done. Thank you!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your kind words, fellowship , and support.
Blessings
Brother Badger ~
Comment from Cranial Thinker
My Brother Darren this is just what I needed to read/hear at this very moment life feeling so much like there is not enough air circulating in my portion of livable space struggling ever day to see not visualize past my present station of emotional intrusiveness by thugs having absolutely nothing else to do but to mess with an aging man who stays to himself desiring peace not just for himself but the world as well....A helper is who I am and names are so unimportant to me whenever it comes to helping those challenged in life as I've opened my place many a times for people to this very day I cannot tell you their names but 87,000.00 dollars later I'm broke but happy I could be of help to those that I did....This is such a wonderful uplifting spirit infusing read thank you so very much for sharing it....Cranial Thinker
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My Brother Darren this is just what I needed to read/hear at this very moment life feeling so much like there is not enough air circulating in my portion of livable space struggling ever day to see not visualize past my present station of emotional intrusiveness by thugs having absolutely nothing else to do but to mess with an aging man who stays to himself desiring peace not just for himself but the world as well....A helper is who I am and names are so unimportant to me whenever it comes to helping those challenged in life as I've opened my place many a times for people to this very day I cannot tell you their names but 87,000.00 dollars later I'm broke but happy I could be of help to those that I did....This is such a wonderful uplifting spirit infusing read thank you so very much for sharing it....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Thank-you, my brother. And you have provided for me; we are a mutually beneficial symbiosis.
Blessings,
Brother Darren
