Last Night
Experiencing a fearful nightmare6 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry.Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your photo completed the piece well.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry.Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your photo completed the piece well.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from BeasPeas
I love the startled look on this guy's face. Good rhyming in this poem which is written mostly in tercets. Content is amusing. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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I love the startled look on this guy's face. Good rhyming in this poem which is written mostly in tercets. Content is amusing. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much for the read.
Comment from Bobbi22
Dearest may not want to be near anymore if those gas bubbles are enough to float a hot air balloon. That is a lot of fear - hopefully not a FanStory rival. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Dearest may not want to be near anymore if those gas bubbles are enough to float a hot air balloon. That is a lot of fear - hopefully not a FanStory rival. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank for the read and the review.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Last Night Is a very nice entry for the use these words writing prompt. You took the challenge to heart and brought us a very delightful story that alerts us to the dangers of those pesky nightmares. I seldom run across the word that I'm totally unfamiliar with but with your poem I did. Thank you for using the word alacrity, And for using it correctly as well. Good luck with the contest. Thank you for sharing.May God bless you!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Last Night Is a very nice entry for the use these words writing prompt. You took the challenge to heart and brought us a very delightful story that alerts us to the dangers of those pesky nightmares. I seldom run across the word that I'm totally unfamiliar with but with your poem I did. Thank you for using the word alacrity, And for using it correctly as well. Good luck with the contest. Thank you for sharing.May God bless you!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the read and the comment.
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You are welcome.
Embrace the love from above.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello mystery poet,
Oh-h-h goodness! Everything was going quite honky dory until ... the bubbling outpouring!!
Without you my life would be "untuned" ... so she's to blame for the ... noise??
Nice, relaxed rhyme in your lines, by the way. :)
Chuckles!
Best wishes for the contest,
Sonali
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Hello mystery poet,
Oh-h-h goodness! Everything was going quite honky dory until ... the bubbling outpouring!!
Without you my life would be "untuned" ... so she's to blame for the ... noise??
Nice, relaxed rhyme in your lines, by the way. :)
Chuckles!
Best wishes for the contest,
Sonali
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the read. Oh, no she is need not to blame. It was probably the beans.
Comment from frogbook
Funny and original use of the words required. He does look a bit like he just passed a little-LOl. Best of luck in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Funny and original use of the words required. He does look a bit like he just passed a little-LOl. Best of luck in the voting booth.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the read. He needs not to eat beans late at night.
