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Comment from nordicgirl
I missed this one with your damned sneaky ways. Hehehe.
I like these scripts. This is really fun and touching too. I see no reason to give in to age either. I know people like this. YOU, for instance. Haaaaa!!!! NG
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I missed this one with your damned sneaky ways. Hehehe.
I like these scripts. This is really fun and touching too. I see no reason to give in to age either. I know people like this. YOU, for instance. Haaaaa!!!! NG
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
Comment from jusylee72
That is quite a picture you painted. It is really funny and cute at the same time. The dialogue is catchy and truly shows each ones characters. I think they are rather fond of each other in a way that they know each other well. thank you, i enjoyed the prompt also.
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That is quite a picture you painted. It is really funny and cute at the same time. The dialogue is catchy and truly shows each ones characters. I think they are rather fond of each other in a way that they know each other well. thank you, i enjoyed the prompt also.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love Lydia - great character and great romance story between these two old birds with plenty of fun. Great script for the (sadly) final Potlatch. So sorry that the politics has got in the way of this little group.
thanks for all your work, and Lydia and Arlene leave me with a smile.
cheers,
valda
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Love Lydia - great character and great romance story between these two old birds with plenty of fun. Great script for the (sadly) final Potlatch. So sorry that the politics has got in the way of this little group.
thanks for all your work, and Lydia and Arlene leave me with a smile.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
Comment from humpwhistle
Mickey, I have no idea of what the author of this prompt had in mind, but I would expect it wasn't granny sex. Yes, you pushed the envelope. But where is the heart? Where is the human connection?
Just sayin'.
Peace, Lee
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Mickey, I have no idea of what the author of this prompt had in mind, but I would expect it wasn't granny sex. Yes, you pushed the envelope. But where is the heart? Where is the human connection?
Just sayin'.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
Comment from mutopian
Good script. The personalities of the ladies come across really well, even if you hadn't given such detailed descriptions of them first.
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Good script. The personalities of the ladies come across really well, even if you hadn't given such detailed descriptions of them first.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
Comment from LIJ Red
There is a ton of truth in this tongue in cheek. Senior ladies live together much more often than old men, and are much healthier than geezers.Don't see a thing wrong with the writing, either.
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There is a ton of truth in this tongue in cheek. Senior ladies live together much more often than old men, and are much healthier than geezers.Don't see a thing wrong with the writing, either.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
Comment from robyn corum
Michael,
This was so much FUN! I read avidly to see what the old --- witches would do. This was a high old time for me (I don't get out much!) heeheehee! Thanks for the laugh!
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Michael,
This was so much FUN! I read avidly to see what the old --- witches would do. This was a high old time for me (I don't get out much!) heeheehee! Thanks for the laugh!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
