Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written haiku club challenge. Your words flow well and I could picture the tadpoles slipping down the leaves. This has been a really fun challenge. well done.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you, winnona, for your great review for my frog haiku. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response. Glad you liked the imagery.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Well, how delightful is this? A 'tadpoles waterslide!' I love this. Great picture too, a wonderful haiku!! Also great notes explaining! Sunday Blessings to you...

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you for your great review for my frog haiku, Irish Rain. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response. They sure are cute little critters.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by Irish Rain on 01-Feb-2017

You're welcome Miss Karyn!!!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This haiku is very picturesque and bring a smile to the face of this reader. Great entry in the haiku multiwriter book. Blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you for your great review for my frog haiku, Patricia. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response. So glad it made you smile.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this haiku. I love the wording about the tree frog. There is so much to learn about them. I love the art work you used too! Great job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you for your great review for my frog haiku, Teri. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Karyn,

That is some mighty interesting information. I had no idea. Isn't God amazing!? I don't see how anyone can argue for Evolution in light of these things. Amazing! Nice haiku!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you, Robyn, for your great review for my frog haiku. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response. The red-eyed tree frogs are so tiny, but sure have lots of cool facts about them.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Tessa Kay

Exceptional

How cute! Love the image your words created of the tadpoles having fun sliding into the water. They are slippy creatures anyway. Great Haiku with a perfect punch line. Well done. :)

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

I'm so pleased you enjoyed my haiku enough to award it one of your sixth stars, Tessa. Thank you for your awesome review, kind comments, and very generous rating. I'm delighted you enjoyed the imagery and satori, and thank you for your kind and encouraging response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a lovely poem. I can see the tadpoles sliding down the leaf into the water and then they swim around. Excellent haiku form that creates a clear picture of nature.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you for your great review for my frog haiku, mermaids. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is a beautifully penned amphibious landing. The line and syllable count are spot on. The kigo is inherent in "eggs hatch". The imagery is concrete and seamlessly connected between lines one and two. The satori is the clever observation I so associate with your stellar writes. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you, Mystic Angel, for your great review for my frog haiku. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response. I'm pleased you enjoyed the satori.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from loismddavis

Excellent

this is a really nice presentation with a colorful picture. Your Haiku is classic as to syllable count which I always enjoy. I also learned something about frogs that I did not know. good job

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you for your great review for my frog haiku, Loismddavis. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from gene roush

Excellent

I don't know how a poet is capable of creating an image much less tell a story with so few words in such a constrictive art form.
Nice job.
It was full of imagery, andinformative.
Thanks for sharing
Gene

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you, Gene, for your great review for my frog haiku. I appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response. So happy you liked the imagery.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)