Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Sometimes with just a touch you know. You know and are assure that yes this is the one. Your task is now not to lose what you have found. It is not always an easy task because our pride, our greed, our stupidity gets in the way and it makes us say and do things that we ought not do, yet we do them anyway and we wind up singing that same old sad song, "I am so sorry." Save it.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017

Thanks for the read. My hope is that we find the courage to keep love alive.

Comment from WalkerMan

Excellent

Yes, true love of a giving kind has the power to end loneliness. The source may be a caring person, or God. This poem works either way. Well done, and aptly illustrated.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017

Thank you for the read and your comment.

reply by WalkerMan on 30-Jan-2017

You are welcome. I like the post. -- Mike

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

--I was alone/You took my hand /Love filled me = 10 words -Good job
--the connection between lines is not that great but it is not a requirement.
--presentation is pretty :)

Good job, my friend

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017

Thanks for the read and the comment.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This ten-word poem, Alone No More, says in its short and sweet way that the empty set (0) + (love) = (2 in love). That works out mathematically as I am sure it does in the real world.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017

Thank you for the read and the comment.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine poem for the contest
You managed to say in ten words
what many can't say in a thousand
Excellent art work to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017

Thanks for the read and your kind words.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

One cannot express love for another more simply than you have in this 10-word poem. The reader is left to use his romantic imagination to fill in all the details that preceded this magical event.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017

Thanks for the read and the kind comment

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Sweet love poem so close to valentines day. You made it with only ten words and it had meaning and style. You also illustrated it well thank you for a brightened day. enjoy

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017

Thanks for the read and your kind comment. I'm happy it brightened your day.

Comment from papa55mike

Exceptional

I don't know how many of these I've read today, but this one is the best. The picture is perfect and the first and last lines are terrific!

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for the read and the wonderful rating.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. Your well-chosen words flowed well and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017

Thanks for the read.