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Comment from Laidy
This poem was very interesting to me, as I watched the picture gurgle in the mud. I really enjoyed reading it and thought it came together well. I do hope your froggy critters return as well, one day so you once again hear them. :)
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This poem was very interesting to me, as I watched the picture gurgle in the mud. I really enjoyed reading it and thought it came together well. I do hope your froggy critters return as well, one day so you once again hear them. :)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Yes, Laidy, every time I walk over the bridge I do a sound check and listen to hear if the frogs have returned. They will return. Thank you for your review.
Comment from azwildrosa
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Nice haiku. I have a little thing for frogs. When I was a little girl I would hunt them with my brother in the ditches out by our house. Flood chews muddy lily pads. Is a great line giving off a nice image. Thank you for sharing. Its a pleasure again to read your work.
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Nice haiku. I have a little thing for frogs. When I was a little girl I would hunt them with my brother in the ditches out by our house. Flood chews muddy lily pads. Is a great line giving off a nice image. Thank you for sharing. Its a pleasure again to read your work.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your review. I am glad my haiku brought back childhood memories.
Comment from Ella25
Your haiku is excellent, Andre. Makes me feel like I am with you listening to frog songs. Excellent composition complemented by the moving image. That frog is priceless :) Beautifully presented. Blessings, Ella
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Your haiku is excellent, Andre. Makes me feel like I am with you listening to frog songs. Excellent composition complemented by the moving image. That frog is priceless :) Beautifully presented. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Yes, Ella, I used to always hear frogs when I walked bridged over creeks. After the flood, I no longer hear them. Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome, Andre. Frogs will come back to sing close to my place in the Spring. Ella
Comment from winnona
This is a well-written Haiku club challenge poem. I am sure the frogs will return. It is cold and winter time.Many of the frogs hibernate in the cold, Your poem was very well written and conveyed the aftermath of the waterways flooding.
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This is a well-written Haiku club challenge poem. I am sure the frogs will return. It is cold and winter time.Many of the frogs hibernate in the cold, Your poem was very well written and conveyed the aftermath of the waterways flooding.
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
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Yes, Winnona, I could have sworn I heard frogs before the storm. I even wrote a haiku about stopping on the bridge to listen to haiku. Listening to the flooded creak now and hearing no wildlife unnerved me. Frogs will return. Thank you for your review.
Comment from DR DIP
Firstly Sis this is a great photo and you know what else I get your haiku i like this one because I can understand the dilemma. thank you for posting
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Firstly Sis this is a great photo and you know what else I get your haiku i like this one because I can understand the dilemma. thank you for posting
dip
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Dip, for giving my poem its first review. I am glad you understood the dilemma.
