True Friends
A sonnet to true friendship93 total reviews
Comment from karenina
True friends are the foundation of our little castle of personal existence...and we find out how "true" they are when things get tough. Some run away, and the true ones run toward you... Karenina
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True friends are the foundation of our little castle of personal existence...and we find out how "true" they are when things get tough. Some run away, and the true ones run toward you... Karenina
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
How true is this that on dark days a friend can shed some light. This is a meaningful sonnet, written in perfect metre and rhyme and importantly carries a strong message of hope.
Great poem, Jay and it's just the thing to read today. :)
Gloria
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How true is this that on dark days a friend can shed some light. This is a meaningful sonnet, written in perfect metre and rhyme and importantly carries a strong message of hope.
Great poem, Jay and it's just the thing to read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This is a excellent and true poem. In my life journey my friends have been very helpful and supportive. Many of them are gone now but the
love and memories they left cannot be measured
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This is a excellent and true poem. In my life journey my friends have been very helpful and supportive. Many of them are gone now but the
love and memories they left cannot be measured
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
You are so right. Family is important, but friends are very important too and sometimes they even understand us better.
Thanks so much for sharing another beautiful poem.
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You are so right. Family is important, but friends are very important too and sometimes they even understand us better.
Thanks so much for sharing another beautiful poem.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is delightful. I think it would be awesome in a card to someone who is going through a rough time financially or health-wise. I like the line "send peace and comfort in your daily fight." And the last line packs it in. Thanks for sharing!
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This is delightful. I think it would be awesome in a card to someone who is going through a rough time financially or health-wise. I like the line "send peace and comfort in your daily fight." And the last line packs it in. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have rightly expressed your view point about identifying and having a true friendship, that true friendship is a given and it is never bought overnight; well said, well done.
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You have rightly expressed your view point about identifying and having a true friendship, that true friendship is a given and it is never bought overnight; well said, well done.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from phil nelson
once again I thank you for your wisdom that you impart to us so generously in your sonnets. Your poems are always a joy to read and to heed
All the Best!
Phil
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once again I thank you for your wisdom that you impart to us so generously in your sonnets. Your poems are always a joy to read and to heed
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Jaybird. Thank you for the sonnet dedicated to friendship. You have described what friends mean to each other and what they are willing to do for each other. Robert
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Hello Jaybird. Thank you for the sonnet dedicated to friendship. You have described what friends mean to each other and what they are willing to do for each other. Robert
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
How very true this poem is! Friends can help ease you through many things. I lost my best friend when we were 19, and even though I enjoy my friends old and new, there has never been anyone quite as close in spirit as she. Even at our young age, we knew it was God that drew us together. I will always treasure the time we had and look forward to seeing her again one day. xoxo
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How very true this poem is! Friends can help ease you through many things. I lost my best friend when we were 19, and even though I enjoy my friends old and new, there has never been anyone quite as close in spirit as she. Even at our young age, we knew it was God that drew us together. I will always treasure the time we had and look forward to seeing her again one day. xoxo
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Jaybird, this is a lovely poem with good abab rhyme throughout. A lovely final couplet - and so true. Lovely first line 'As I stroll through my hall of memories,' - good use of metaphor. I really enjoyed reading this fine poem to friendship. Warm regards Dorothy
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Hello Jaybird, this is a lovely poem with good abab rhyme throughout. A lovely final couplet - and so true. Lovely first line 'As I stroll through my hall of memories,' - good use of metaphor. I really enjoyed reading this fine poem to friendship. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
